Nice work. I like this and Bluethorns for very different reasons, which will make judgin hard. But here goes.
Build: 2/5. There just isn't much here, it's just some builds on a plate. But I do like the hut, and the rubble, and the cut away so you can see inside.
Figures: 4/5. I like your attempt to differentiate between FIS and URS, and your attempt and a kneeling troop, and the dead one. Overall very well done on this category.
Accuracy: 2/5. Well the army is here, and you got the barrenness of it, but the building....well as far as I had been going the only buildings were millitary.
Special Features: 2/5. Well you had blasters and blood.
Overall: 10/20! Again, a good first entry, but the only thing that really impressed me were the figs, but they were nice.