well, here he is! my self moc in all his glory!
instead of giving you his bio i will give you some info about his species (destrivian) Here goes:
destrivians are a specie native to the planet of aros and control the element of stardust, there coluor scheme is usually black with transparent bleu as the secondary colour. they are fully organic but there skin has evolved on some places in metal like material( on the chest , lower legs and back)they are cold blooded and are 2 and a half meters long, usually they are good tacticians but can quickly become arrogant if they have much succes.
they are able to wear kanohi and decent from a now extinct reptillian creatures known as aradonts. they (just like humans) know childhood puberty and adultness. and have limited control over there element ( like a turaga) but when absorbing great amounts of energy they will gain powers compareble with that of a toa, they have an average live span of 800 years and cant change in a turaga, when they have used up all of there (i just call it toa energy) they usually die they are able to unleash a nova blast but it requiers less energy of them in order to keep them alive.
well i hope you enjoyed this little story!
About this creation
HEY guys, will you please please please please make this my most populare moc? shouldnt be to hard, i only need seven likes....
Cusro feet! yay
Tarohk: i feel sexier already!
fourth wall: i am pretty happy with how he came out! i am really proud of the head (ITS COSTOM!) now thats done i only have to make the lower legs custom, the feet turned out pretty well to (CUSTOM) they now have moveable toes!
anypoop tell me what ya think and like this creation!
This is a pretty good MOC, but it seems in need of a lot of improvement. For example, you've made the upper arms and upper legs custom, but really didn't accomplish much that prefab limbs didn't already have. When making custom portions of the MOC, the goal is not to be custom for the sake of it, but to make it custom so that it accomplishes something that normal limbs couldn't do. Speaking of normal limbs, I like what you did with armoring the lower legs, but it seems too bulky there compared to the rest of him. Lower arms are pretty good. Torso seems really skeletal, there's no triangular torso-muscle shaping, and the angled axles on the chest just seem weird -- maybe trade those ought for some fang elements. Also, the wings are really skeletal and don't look flightworthy -- those should probably be removed entirely.
It's a good start. I like the overall idea of him but his torso seems disproportionate to his thick legs. The torso is a little too short and could use some more armor.
While I don't think the wings should be removed entirely, they could definitely use some fleshing out. Using some sails like these: http://www.bricklink.com/catalogItem.asp?P=sailbb54, would definitely help to make them look more like wings.
The upper arms could use more armor on the front but otherwise they look fine. I really like the custom feet as well. Overall a good MOC but it could use some work.