Yes after so long im back to Mocpages :D and ill be showing my MOCs full force ^^
About this creation
Name: Toa Crystal(Equian Crystaline)
Element: Water, Crystaline, Ice, Iron
Species: Equian (Similar to Matoran Species)
Mask Power/Special Powers:
Elite Team Number: #24012
So This Is The Lovely Toa Crystal :) One Of The Most Caring Humble And Loyal Toa Of Water With A Mission To Have Peace For Her Koro And To Fight Off Evil.
Bio:As A Matorian Crystal Always Was A Loving, Compasionant,And Trust Worthy Girl Who As Well Loved To Play Around And Give Help To Others .She Lives In The Aqua Koro Tribe And Shes Well Known There But She Also Likes To Travel To Windra Koro And Artic Koro As Well.But A Few Years Ago Windra Koro Was Erased By A Couple Of Bad Guys Gangs And She Felt Into A Deep Depression Knowing The Person She Loved Was In Windra Koro And He Probably Didn't Survive.She Then Got A Weird Stone And Allowed Her To Become A Toa.She Was Shocked And Overwhelmed But She Assumed Her Place As A Toa And Started Her Training To Master Her Elemental Powers.It's Only Two Years Later Takes Her To Completed The Training And As Well Learned Another Element. When She Got Back Her Koro Got A Information About A War Commencing And They Needed Help. She Didn't Held Back And She Gather Up A Rag Tag Team Of Alot Of Aqua Korians Toas To Aid In The War As Fighters Or Healers. She As Well As Another Toa Were Voted As Favorites To Be Captains/Leaders In The War. As Soon As They Entered Crystal Was Fighting As An Experienced Toa But Doesn't Know Any War Time Experience/Strategies Yet Her Team Pulled Off. When Then She Was Push By A Mysterious Being Of Evil(Makuta) That Almost Killed Her But Then A Windra Korian Toa Appeared And Was Followed By Two Others Being In The Back. She Then Turned Around To See A Stone Korian Toa Similar To Her Predicament And Nearly Falls. Suddenly The Korian Toa Arrived And Tried To Help The Stone Korian Toa But He Refused And He Went To Her First To Be Saved, Then The Other Toa. She Was Then Relieved To Be Alive And Was About To Ask The Windra Korian Toa His Name When A Explosion Happened And She Was Saved Again By The Windra Toa But The Other One Died And The Windra Korian Was In Grief. She Was Struck As Well And She Blame His Loss On Herself. But He Nodded No And She Fell Down Into Him And Hugged Him To Make Him Feel Better At Least For A Moment.
Time Passed And One Day When She Was Camping Out And Taking Her Armor Garments Out Into Her Regular Clothes, She Hears A Quiet Sound And She Becomes A Little Freaked Out. When She Readys Her Sword She Hears Two Toas Walking And Talking About Something And She's Bounces On Then.Not Knowing Who They Are She Almost Provokes A Fight With One Of Them And With The Confusion All Over She Becomes A Bit Shy And She Feels Wrong To Attack Her Allies Toa Hotshot And Toa Nitro.They Then Go Into A Elite Team Academy And With Bitter Work All Of Them Became Elite Toas. She Then Layed Low For A While Until War Time Came Along And She Joined The Fight.She Then Reunites With Elite Team #24012 With Nitro And Hotshot And They Fought Out The Evil.She As Well As Surprised To See Nitro And Hotshot Grown While She Gets A Feeling That She Knows Nitro From Somewhere Somehow. But She Keeps It Only As A Thought Or A Secret.
So lets start with the overall feet and legs,pretty basic but I like them ^^ (However yes in time they will be change into more sleek but custom designs)
Going into overall the body it is custom and I fixed some problems with her last look (Which was showcased in Toa Nitro Creation)where it limited some articulation in the head and overall hip.
The left overall arm (Credit to Kylernuva135 shoulder design just modify a bit)
The Right overall arm (meh kinda plain will fix that soon :p)
Overall the top look of Crystal :D with the trademark winglets near her shoulders and stuff ^^
A surprise :0 she has some hidden knifes (Ohhhhh XD)
Poses of overall weaponary (with custom Equnos Nui made by herself :) and double bladed scale swords)
Crystal with 7th Sin (Review of him later)
Crystal with one of her old allies now an enemy, Forgotten Sin
This updated personally makes her look more feminine, do you agree?
Closer look of arm armor
Closer look of her body and her um....bust
Closer look of right arm armor (still plain :P)
Closer look of leg armor with jets (so she can fly :D)
Closer look of her back
Her without her mask (Still don't know how to make fitting custom heads yet :L)
Her mask with War helmet/hat
Her without the helmet (dunno but I like her better with the helmet/hat :.)
Oh see can also put her helmet in her back :D (Thats convientent ^^)
Final Pose (Like this one the best :D)
Thank you for viewing the page and make sure to see more of my creations :)
This MOC is... odd. Not the physical build, but the page as well. There are things that are a little bit off about everything, but at the same time it's still well presented and the MOC has a very good aesthetic and design going that I really like. First off, the text is hard to read on a white background. Secondly, it's not necessary to capitalise every word in the description. It was difficult to unsderstand, but I got the gist of it, and Crystal is a pretty good character, I think. As for the build, it's clear you have painted parts, and in this case it looks really good - but other people on the site have very different opinions about painted parts. What I really, really don't like about the build is her torso. Her proportions aren't right; shoulder/hip ratio is off, breasts are a stud or two too high up on the torso, etc. I reccomend looking here http://lol-pretzel.deviantart.com/journal/This-Gets-on-my-Nerves-Proportions-348923417 There's some useful stuff on DA intended to help people draw humanoid figures, but it works with MOCs, too.