Perhaps a bit oversimplified as an addition, looks good on its own merits, but regarded in the Contest guidelines, 6 points. I still like the look of the armor on the outer sides of the lower arms, and it's still streamlined enough not to overbulk the original limbs.
I know this is mostly just an upper body armor, but this design is awesome. A truly unique style, 7 points. A little more... mass? Coverage? ... Stuff? Yes, a little more stuff would have gone a long way. Still, well done and good luck!
I was expecting something... Bigger, from you. But oh well, you were busy, and it's not a bad entry at all. I really, really like the weapons: the Vahki Brain and the Nynrah bellows' use surprised me, and works very well. Shoulders combined with the Kohrak visor is my favourite part, though. Good luck in the contest, dear! ;3