Originality: 2 Yeah. Build: 7 Just a tad too many grays. More brown tones would be nice. I do like that you added something that could be a "Zombie" or more likely a Ghoul from Fallout. Presentation: 4 I know that there is nothing wrong, but maybe just a bit more explanation of maybe what the building is or some more setting for what's happening or why it happened. Anyway, still not bad. 13/20
Originality: 2. This is about as stereotypical as it gets. Its a good build in itself, but I have to judge on originality as well. Sorry.
Build: 7 Like I said, the build itself is quite nice, if a little plain. A little more brown perhaps... The zombie was a nice tough (seriously, you're the only person to put a zombie in.)
Presentation: 5. There's nothing I can mark you down on here. No grammatical mistakes, clear pictures, all 0 links work perfectly. Great job there!