And here we are.. The law has finally caught up with us. If only that guard hadn't seen us, we would have been long away with our treasure that we had stolen from a noble, I cant remember his name, but that doesn't matter. I have more important things to worry about right now.
Suddenly Mornak spins around and throws his ax into one of the Noble's hired mercenaries, sending him toppling over the cliff into the water
Another Mercenary rushes up to him. Mornak grabs the mercenary's spear and spins around, chopping him in the back of the neck, splintering the mercenary's helmet
he then pushes the Mercenary into the other one, coming up the cliff, sending them both down into the Piranha infested water
And then, I, at the same instant that Mornak Attacked, I rushed at the guard
Knocking him down and stabbing him into the neck
I then spun around and threw my blade into the other guard's neck.
And as fast as it began, it was ended.
We were wanted men now. Well, We already were... But we are even now wanted, that noble will be sure to spread the news....
Unfortunately for Mornak, he had lost his ax, since the Mercenary had fallen into the water with his ax embedded in his stomach.. ... But no worries, we can buy even better weapons now, with all of this money.
Fourth Wall: Yes I know, I added this AFTER I added the MOC, but I had forgotten to mention something. My Character Update! He kinda, changed his clothes... It's the same face, but different clothes, and... A different weapon. I mean, come on! Who's going to stop you from, changing your clothes. That can't be illegal. And if it is, I'll make it legal.
Well, I guess the tree gets a few points for being unique, even if it's aesthetically a bit lacking... Although I must wonder why you have this linked on your homepage rather than a better build like The Oculus...
Nice build! I sorta like how your doing like short story's that all combine;)
I honestly like that your character has changed (He probably really smelled :P) But where did he get them, you don't just find garmets on the side of the road?
Nice job actually having water under the cliff! You didn't have to, could've just been the edge of the build, but you did. And that's cool. The waves are an even nicer touch. Cool little story, and yeah. That's it.
Ok, now to actually comment. You really have a way of making Mythron Soldiers look evil. -_- But they still looked good! I love that tree, and the rocks and water look great too! And boy, you sure are good at editing! That blood, man! Looked so realistic! Great job!