100,000 years in the future a young Toa fights for justice and freedom in a civilization fallen from grace on Spherus Magna.
About this creation
Keeping with the tradition on my mocaversery here is the newest version of my Self Moc; Toa Phosphorus!
Name: Fever
Other names: Toa Phosphorus, Pho, Phos
Titles: Gamma Team leader, Toa, The Orange Toa
Affiliations: Archangel Network
Alignment: Good
Element: Phosphorus
Deputy: Crystallum
Status: Dead
Moc Status: Alive
Well here he is! My favourite version yet. This is meant to represent a younger Phosphorus, the youngest yet. Up until this point my versions had shown his age progressing but this version I wanted to take him back to version two. Where he was lean, strong, and agile looking. Thin but not too thin, and not crazy weaponized. This is the product. I would say this is the purest form of Phosphorus as this is what he would have looked like after just becoming a Toa. Noticeable changes are the shortened waist, leaner legs, streamlined arms, and the removal of the communication link.
A dynamic action pose.
For commentary on the build please see my review when it is released on youtube.
I just love this shot.
He can fold his arms.
Another favourite picture of mine.
By Gringats Beard! BTW I totally have to make a sentient beard moc with eyes and a mouth called Gringats beard.
The little Bio Cup entry the could. Can't say many would have guessed from this entry that I'd be headed to finals but yet here I go. Wish me luck!
Thanks all for looking. Its been an amazing 3 years and I hope a least another amazing 3! Thanks for all the support!
Forget breaking the fourth wall with a little blurb of text lets break it by catching Phos leaving the photo shoot!
Well hope you all enjoyed the moc. Incredibly the update took me almost no time at all and came together in a flash. I only spend about 10 minutes on the legs and about another 15 on everything else. For such a drastic update it wasn't a very big time investment. I think with this version you can see my progression as a mocist and I have displayed some of my best skills on this. Character wise he's evolved and you can see it in the model.
BRICKCON!
I will once again be returning to the great Seattle centre to show off my models so please if you're in the area on the weekend of October the 6th please stop by the con and say hello! I'll be there pretty much all day on both public days and i'll be wearing my Toa Phosphorus shirt so I should be pretty easy to spot at the Bionicle table or around the con.
Thanks so much guys for 3 great years.
Phosphorus.
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March 30, 2016 |
The torso, arms and legs are looking sweet! But... I really can't stand those wing pieces on the head. |
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December 21, 2014 |
Nice work, the photo booth is well put together as well. I like the Orange, gunmetal and dark gray combo. The head is also creative. |
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December 18, 2014 |
this is epic! also could you tell me how you made the photo booth for it? |
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Toa Trexal November 4, 2014 |
You didn't post this years version! :D |
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October 29, 2014 |
Cool! self moc! I think its my fav to! |
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October 29, 2014 |
Quoting Quartz Roolz
great moc. btw mind if i use him in my story line. i will try to be as faithful to the original character as possible and give you credit for him.
Yea sure go ahead man. |
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October 29, 2014 |
great moc. btw mind if i use him in my story line. i will try to be as faithful to the original character as possible and give you credit for him. |
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August 26, 2014 |
This. Is. Sick. Perfectly proportionate, and detailed. Welcome to my favorite builders list. |
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Alex Jascol October 11, 2013 |
Very nice MOC, Phos, very suprised to see him go this far... I remember when you messaged me over skype telling me about the enormous dragon you created and now...
You're very underrated.
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October 4, 2013 |
Holy cheese doodles ninja tuna ftw |
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September 21, 2013 |
Heeeeeyyyyy Phos! Nice update! I've always loved your creations. they are amazing! Are you going to brickcon? I'll be there bro. ;D
~~Yang |
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September 16, 2013 |
I love the new version! Oh and sadly my computer no longer lets me upload picture to mocpages. I'm at youtube now. See my new episode here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5qjLDbFNSE |
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September 6, 2013 |
Best version yet! So detailed...so majestic...XD |
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September 5, 2013 |
Mm, gunmetal! Best version yet! Love the armor on the side of the knees! Incredible coverage and great work on the designs! I'd also love some shoulder pads! :) |
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September 5, 2013 |
Fantastic! My favorite version yet, for sure. I love the gunmetal. The knees are brilliant, such a cool joint. This version is just so sleek and well armored. |
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Same question as Chosen One. |
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Fenrek (Fluffy) September 4, 2013 |
Coolio moc man, love the update, really showing off some brilliant skills here and NPU all over the place. My favourite part has to be the arms by far. They're a bit bulbous near to the hands, kinda like droplet shapes and they work well with the style. It's a shame about the torso/wast articulation, the system block seems to really hinder Pho's ability to lean forwards. All in all a great moc with impressive techniques ;) |
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September 4, 2013 |
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant
:)}
Dat beard |
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September 4, 2013 |
:)} |
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September 4, 2013 |
Almost flawless! :D |
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September 4, 2013 |
Nice one dude! Loving the look of this guy! My only complaint is that the upper arms are a little thinner than the rest of the MOC, but this is me nit-picking because there's no definate bad thing in my eyes. But still, great job. |
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September 4, 2013 |
Nice version. If I ay ask, what happened to V7? |
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September 4, 2013 |
Yep, my favorite version of Phosphorus. By far.
The achingly thin waist has been (at last!) killed, the MOC is indeed streamlined and balanced. My second-fave SMOC overall from now on. |
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September 4, 2013 |
Simple yet epic. Another brilliant moc phos! |
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September 4, 2013 |
That leg design is the most brilliant thing I've ever seen! Using those old Throwbot hands the way you did is pure genius! Love it :D |
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Stormjay Rider September 3, 2013 |
Awesome! I did not expect you to make it smaller. Orange X-pod shields FTW! |
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X ~ September 3, 2013 |
My favorite version of Pho..no doubt.
It's absolutly sleek and I can't really see any emptiness, it's almost human like.
And I seriously love the legs, they are great!
Happy 3 Years!
And Good Luck In The Bio-Cup!
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September 3, 2013 |
Truly a Stunning piece here! This has to be one of my favorite Self-Mocs I have ever seen:D It is great Pho! |
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September 3, 2013 |
Definitely the cleanest and most refined version yet, and I'm glad you fixed the waist. Altogether great. |
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September 3, 2013 |
Quoting Crazy Awesome #1
Lookin good phos, coulda had a v8. :D Really love the lower arms especially; those gunmetal highlights are gorgeous. Love what you did with the knees too. I still think his shoulders are a bit low (even though that seems to be a signature of phos); ever thought about throwing some shoulder pauldrons on him? I think it'd look pretty badarse. Awesome job though!
Funny you ask. I did look at shoulder armour but ultimately I couldn't find a piece to suit my needs. Maybe in the future with new pieces I will find something. Thanks for asking!
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September 3, 2013 |
Lookin good phos, coulda had a v8. :D Really love the lower arms especially; those gunmetal highlights are gorgeous. Love what you did with the knees too. I still think his shoulders are a bit low (even though that seems to be a signature of phos); ever thought about throwing some shoulder pauldrons on him? I think it'd look pretty badarse. Awesome job though! |
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September 3, 2013 |
Not sure, I have another one ordered - maybe he can keep it :P |
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September 3, 2013 |
LOL, I actually photoshoped Grignat's (MOC's) head onto the body of one of the Greybeards from Skyrim. Uploaded it on Custom BIONICLE Wiki. XD |
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Wow, I genuinely love this version. I think the main problem with the other versions is that the limbs felt a bit cluttered, but the clean look of this one fits him very well. Pretty close to perfect, I'm not sure if I can you can really upgrade him seriously anymore. And LOL, my Gringat's Beard joke continues to spread. XD Everything's awesome. :) |
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September 3, 2013 |
Quoting NoWhereMan .
Wow. easily the best version yet. I love the new legs. IMO, Phos always looked too lanky with the original legs, but these look great. I especially love what you did with the knees. It's not everyday that you see the side of the knee have armor. 5/5
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September 3, 2013 |
Wow. easily the best version yet. I love the new legs. IMO, Phos always looked too lanky with the original legs, but these look great. I especially love what you did with the knees. It's not everyday that you see the side of the knee have armor. 5/5 |
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September 3, 2013 |
Wow. This is amazing, great job! |
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September 3, 2013 |
Thanks for all the great comments guys! |
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September 3, 2013 |
Quoting Starscream Soundwave
Very cool. Didn't an old version of this get spammed? I think I remember that!
Yes and old version did get spammed but I deleted it and reuploaded it about a week ago. |
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September 3, 2013 |
Quoting Gilbert Despathens
This is better by far than any other Phos. He looks so solid everywhere, and the dark pearl metallic parts look great with the rest. I hate to say this because the head is Phos' signature feature, but that is the least-developed area and begs for some gunmetal highlights. Come to think of it, the back plate could use some breaking-up too. I should stop complaining; this is actually the best BioMOC I have seen in months and I can't wait for more like it.
Yes but I can't fix all the problems in one update otherwise there wouldn't be any more! :P |
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September 3, 2013 |
Quoting Fortrux and Tom
Yeah! Thanks mate, I realized when watching the livestream - he's a sneaky one that Cossy, wanna watch out >_> :P
You gonna get it back?
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September 3, 2013 |
Quoting Rich Collins... 257th Wolf
By Gringat's Beard! I love it!
By Gringats Beard! |
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September 3, 2013 |
Yeah! Thanks mate, I realized when watching the livestream - he's a sneaky one that Cossy, wanna watch out >_> :P |
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September 3, 2013 |
By Gringat's Beard! I love it! |
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September 3, 2013 |
I absolutely love the knee design, It is BEAUTIFUL. It looks almost like real knees. The forearm design is equally good, I really like the use of that technic block with the HF plate. |
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September 3, 2013 |
Brilliant work, definitely your best version, I'd say. |
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September 3, 2013 |
Very cool. Didn't an old version of this get spammed? I think I remember that! |
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September 3, 2013 |
This is better by far than any other Phos. He looks so solid everywhere, and the dark pearl metallic parts look great with the rest. I hate to say this because the head is Phos' signature feature, but that is the least-developed area and begs for some gunmetal highlights. Come to think of it, the back plate could use some breaking-up too. I should stop complaining; this is actually the best BioMOC I have seen in months and I can't wait for more like it. |
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September 3, 2013 |
Amazin' some of your best work yet, it I do say so myself! |
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September 3, 2013 |
Quoting Fortrux and Tom
Just awesome, he looks really sleek! Congrats Pho! :)
Thanks! Also you where looking for Forturx's mask.... Cossy has it. Just thought you should know. Actually he has the entire moc. lol. |
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September 3, 2013 |
Just awesome, he looks really sleek! Congrats Pho! :) |
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September 3, 2013 |
This guy is freaking amazing! I wish I could build like this :P |
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September 3, 2013 |
Well this guy is AWESOME before he was always ok but I thought he was a bit over weaponized but this guy 0.o |
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Awesome! The gunmetal armor is a nice color in my opinion. |
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