A build for the Lands of Mythron's Regional Challenge.
About this creation
I know, I'm probably not going to win this Challenge, because if I even wanted to win, I wouldn't have built this simple port.. I needed to get things done. You'll see what they are in future builds.
*The pictures have the whole story typed onto them. Do you like this way of story-telling? Or should I go back to the way I used to do it?* *I need your opinion*
Yes. I know the Troll looks almost like a Robot.
That's pretty much all. Comments appreciated.
-Edit- Yes, I know, the buildings stink, and the Troll stinks. But right now, I don't care in the least bit. I was in a rush to finish this. It had been sitting on my desk for weeks and I just wanted to get it over with.
Cool story!...lol troll face...I like Mythron being not so comic-like.
I like it
November 29, 2013
In my opinion, the editing was not bad. Most of it. The reading was defently good since it was on the pics. But when your character ddid the facepalm, it was pretty obvious, and it wasn't reallyneeded. But the buildings were actually pretty good compared to mine, but they could have been better coming from you. But, you were rushed, and I can relate. Overall, I say this was a cool build, and the small things were not enough to stop me from giving you 5/5! Nice build! -WolfCorr
I really like the text in the pictures... it saves time while uploading, I'm guessing? I might try that myself... I wouldn't have done the speech bubbles though... but that's just my taste. Cool story, and also cool build!
Awesome! I like the build, but of course I have some constructive criticism: I think the sewage holes below in the water would have looked better with a black background behind them, so it doesn't look like they just stop right there. It IS a port, so maybe a small boat docked up would have added to the MOC a bit more. I personally didn't like the comic format, or the storyline (Mostly because there really wasn't much of one). I always look forward to your builds because of how great the writing is, and how serious they usually are, which added to the character of the build so much more. This story was all over the place, and I it was a rushed build, so I won't go any further. ;) Great job though, and I hope you manage to get the time you claim to desperately need for your next build!
the script and humor are the best part, the port is nicely done, the 'balloons' are not too distracting, but, I prefer to see all the scene, aside from the blood, there might be too much 'drawing' although it was funny now, on the long run, it brings the quality down, the troll, well, you said it, I like your stories, hopefully you ll have more time next episode.
Normally, I'd say great work! But I however, dislike this comic strip sorta story telling. I prefer the older kind, when there was actually some depth...but again it's your stuff so. Also, not to be super mean...but I KNOW you can do better than this! I found the entire build a bit simplistic for you. For the first time on anyone of your MOCs, I'm giving you a 2/5.