Not bad for a first upload. The photos are slightly blurry, but not the worst I've seen. I'd suggest using a camera tripod to fix that. Anyway, the MOC itself is pretty good. I think it'd be much improved if the orange on the legs were replaced with red. The weapons are quite well designed. Keep up the good work!
Not bad. I have to agree with Stormjay Rider on the color scheme. Try to keep the color to two, maybe three, colors max. Also, try to work on the proportions more. Because of its size, it looks more like a "Stars" male Toa rather than a Female Toa of Fire.
It's pretty simple, but simple is better than attempts at complexity that end up terrible. I say this a lot, but it's worth repeating: This MOC could be improved by a better color scheme. In particular, I think you can replace the orange on the legs and feet with more red -- dark red feet would better spread out that color as well.