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Age of Darkness 02: The Test of the Master
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(Padawan Vito looked on in shock and disbelief at the Jedi Master kneeling in front of him before finally stammering his response)

Vito- Wha- you... you can't do that! I'm not going to fight a Jedi Master for no reason!

Master Zhuan- You will fight Jedi. Your reason is that your very survival and continued existence is in question.

Master Crede- He is correct young Padawan. According to the Old Rite of Padawan Accession the master may test his padawan in any method he chooses, including mortal combat.

(Master Dunnagol spoke up from his hologram)

Dunnagol- Rather harsh, that Rite was, but if he wants them, you must comply.

Master Rizio- I hate to agree but the old ways are still valid, even if they have not been used in decades.

Zhuan- You see padawan. There is no choice in this matter, and your friends may not even speak lest they too feel the wrath of my blade for interference in this sacred rite.

Vito- No. I will not fight you just for the sake of fighting.

(Suddenly without warning Zhuan leaped back at Vito who instantly reacted, narrowly blocking the Master's attack)

Zhuan- Good. Your reflexes have been trained well. You may yet become my apprentice.

(Not waiting for a reply, Zhuan leaped into the air, launching a blast of Force energy at Vito who barely leaped out of the way in time)

(Without stopping Zhuan propelled himself onto the roof of the atrium, sending blasts at Vito who nimble leaped out of the way)

(Sensing his opportunity, as Zhuan leaped off of the roof, Vito launched a blast of Force energy at the Jedi Master who easily avoided the blast)

(Zhuan landed, sending out a massive shockwave of energy and pushing Vito back)

(Without so much as straining the Jedi Master reached out his hand, and lifted a massive boulder of stone out of the ground)

Zhuan-You have done well padawan, but I do not intend to lose this battle.

(Time seemed to slow as Zhuan hurled the rock at Vito who leaped out of the way, carefully sending a precise blast of energy at the Master)

(Surprised Zhuan gasped as the blast send him back into the wall. Seizing the opportunity, Vito leaped at the Master as Kollin Follee from the sidelines shouted)

Kollin- There you go Vito! Finish him off!

(With unnatural speed Zhuan turned, enraged, at Kollin and grasped the padawan, holding his lightsaber to his neck)

Zhuan- I should execute you here and now for this insolence, boy!

Vito- Leave him out of the Master, this fight is between you and me.

Zhuan- On the contrary, he is indeed part of this. The second he opened his mouth, which I anticipated he would, I gained the right to execute him. So padawan, what are you going to do to stop me?

(Smiling slyly Vito nodded up. Zhuan barely raised his eyes and smiled as he sighted the boulder Vito held above him)

Zhuan- Well done padawan. It is not often I am outsmarted.

(Zhuan nodded and deactivated his lightsaber. Eying him with caution, Vito did as well)

(As soon as his lightsaber deactivated, Zhuan pushed aside Kollin and leaped into the air, seizing the massive rock and hurling it back at Vito)

(Vito barely had time to jump out of the way as the rock smashed into the ground and Zhuan landed, his lightsaber pointed at Vito's chest)

Zhuan- Never let your guard down when you have the advantage apprentice. This is your first lesson.

(With a flick of the wrist, Zhuan severed Vito's padawan braid and deactivated his lightsaber)

Zhuan- The Old Rite gives me this honor. Rise. You are my apprentice now.

(Stunned, Vito stood up as Zhuan turned from him)

Zhuan- I have not been outsmarted many times, and those who accomplished such are long dead now. You fought with valor, well done.

Vito- Thank you master.

Zhuan- Masters, my test of the padawan is over. I will take him as my apprentice now.

(Slightly worried, Rizio spoke)

Rizio- Master Zhuan are you certain you wish to take another apprentice? I speak not so much for my son but for your own wellbeing. I has been decades now since... ahem, since your last apprentice.

Zhuan- I have thought long on the subject Master. I am certain and unwavering in my convictions. I will train him.

Headmaster Vede- Then the council does, recognize your decision Master Zhuan.

(Zhuan offered a bow to the Masters before turning imperiously on Kollin)

Zhuan- And one more thing boy. You would do well to restrain yourself. Not many masters are as forgiving as I am.

Kollin- Yes... ahem, yes master.

Zhuan- Do not forget. Apprentice. Say your goodbyes now. It may be a long while before you see them again.

(Rizio smiled, with tears in his eyes, as Vito walked over to him)

Rizio- Vitus, I... well I always knew that this day would come, but I never wanted it to. Even since I found you, crying on the enclave steps I loved you as my own son.

(Vito teared a bit as he embraced Rizio)

Vito- I'll make you proud father. Thank you.

Rizio- I know you will. Stay safe. Master Zhuan will be a fine Master for you. I'll be on Coruscant for time time being, if the Force guides you there, remember to visit.

(Wiping his tears, Kollin, himself slightly teared, grasped his hand)

Kollin- Well look at us! Jedi apprentices now! May the Force be with you Vito.

Vito- You too Kollin. Maybe we'll meet up on Coruscant sometime?

Kollin- Yeah, and maybe we'll find old Katerina too. Get the whole gang back together.

(Vito nodded as Kollin walked to the side, and offered the Masters a bow)

Vede- The lessons learned here, padwan, do not forget. Serve you well they will.

Dunnagol- Indeed. They already seem to be working out for you just fine! Now if only I could take you as my apprentice... ah well. Missed opportunities. Luca L'quilac will have to do.

Crede- Do not forget the Jedi teachings on your apprenticeship. We need not anymore Jedi warlords or Dark Side heretics.

(Vito sighed as he turned to Zhuan)

Vito- Where to now Master?

Zhuan- Apprentice, there are somethings you must know before we continue. The galaxy has changed much, and to properly understand the present, we must take a journey into the past.


  January 28, 2014
nice fight scene!
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  January 28, 2014
Wait what? Padawan Vito, that's my name:D ~Brick
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  January 28, 2014
I've been waiting to read this since episode 1. Can't wait to read #3
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  January 27, 2014
Good story as always.
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