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The Great Experiment, Chapter 11: Battle at the base
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Prohkshi: What isss that noissse?

Prohkshi: Oh, the egg hasss hatched! Massster will be plea-

Creature: -hiss-
Prohkshi: Aaagh!


???: Good morning, sunshine.

Okuta: What the...?

Okuta: You!

???: Don't bother. This cage disables our powers.
Okuta: What are you doing, Dahkurakk?!

Dahkurakk: -chuckles- What am I doing?

Dahkurakk: What are YOU doing?!
Okuta: What exactly are you refering to?

Dahkurakk: Bringing one of my failed experiments back to life and setting it loose!? What the heck is wrong with you?

Okuta: Well, that last part was not supposed to happen... Speaking of setting things loose, why aren't you imprisoned?

Dahkurakk: Because your 'accident' tore apart this entire base, including my prison.

Okuta: Wait... This is an Order base? Why did you bring me here?!
Dahkurakk: To talk to you. Now, WHY did you bring one of my experiments back to life?

Okuta: I needed some living matter for MY experiments.
Dahkurakk: I thought so... Stealing my ideas as usual.

Okuta: What can I say, your ideas are quite... interesting.
Dahkurakk: I'm sure you meant to say 'brilliant'.

Okuta: Alright, you've got your information, now release me before any Order members show up!
Dahkurakk: I wouldn't worry about that. So far, only one of them has.
Okuta: So what did you do with him?

Dahkurakk: You mean her.

Okuta: ...Let me out. She has to be... Let me out!

Dahkurakk: Not gonna happen. You see, I know they're looking for you. And I know SHE's gonna be very happy when she wakes up and sees you here.

Okuta: -chuckles- Still a pacifist, eh?
Dahkurakk: More or less. Believe me, I'd gladly make an exception just for you, but I have more important things to do, so I'll leave you to her.

Okuta: You're leaving me? -chuckles- You fool. I can teleport right back to my base and continue my work.

Dahkurakk: Even if you can miraculously get out of this cage, you do know that it's impossible to teleport in and out of Order bases for all but a few beings, right?
Okuta: -groans-

Dahkurakk: ...Goodbye.
Okuta: You'd leave your own brother in the lion's den?

Dahkurakk: You've betrayed me one too many times, 'brother'.
Okuta: I heard you've done some betraying yourself.
Dahkurakk: A means to an end. Granted, I failed, but because of something that was out of my hands. Besides, I got a lot further than you ever will.
Okuta: We'll see about that once I get out of here...

Dahkurakk: IF you get out of here. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to clean up your mess.

Okuta: Take me with you!
Dahkurakk: -sighs- Do you ever shut up?

Okuta: I could be of help to you...
Dahkurakk: How? Anything you've ever made or done was originally my idea!
Okuta: But all your ideas fail in practice, which is why I alter them somewhat before I use them.
Dahkurakk: Oh, so you've perfected the RMK7?
Okuta: Pretty much, yes. It might've hatched by now.

Dahkurakk: ...Where's your base?
Okuta: I'll show you if you let me go!
Dahkurakk: Ugh, fine.

One moment later...

Dahkurakk: Alright, let's g-


Toa: Nobody ever tell ya you're not supposed to hit a girl?

Okuta: Ah, Elerinn. As feisty as ever, I see.

Elerinn: Shut up. You're next! I'll beat you back in to that box!

Okuta: -chuckles- My dear, I don't take beatings.


Okuta: I deliver them.

Elerinn: Ugh!

Okuta: -grunts-


Okuta: Oh dear, was that your prosthesis?
Elerinn: You s-

Okuta: Shut up! It's time for-

Okuta: What in the name of-
???: There!

Okuta: -grumbles- We wil finish this another time.


Next chapter

I'm finishing this. No matter how long it takes!
But seriously, I've been putting this of for waaaaaay too long. The next chapter should be finished either tomorrow or the day after that.
This is also my first attempt at an actual fight scene. I'm not too happy with how it turned out, but it could've been much worse, I suppose.

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