Well then...For 30 minutes, this isn't bad at all! The tiddly ships are cute, and (As everyone said) the cannon shot is awesome. There may not be as much forced perspective as in other models, but still, I like it!
I love the detail the canon explosion is epic great job! By the way I'm in the middle earth LOM group to check out my intro character creation my first chapter is about to begin here's the link to the creation