Here is a new LOM MOC. It is an outpost for the MBC (Military Building Challenge).
I and the BL scouting troop were just arriving at a new Rainos outpost.
I meet Ronon, the commander of the outpost.
Ronon: I wish to speak to you, Cliffin, privately
I told the BL soldiers to stay where they where.
We walked to the second level which had a jail cell.
We then went to the top level into what looked like a business room.
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Ronon: As you might have heard, the BL have been defeated and only a few remain. Also, the leader of the BL is the prince of Mython who wants to become king. The BL soldiers you have with you would be a good addition to the Rainos military. There is a recruiting center a little more then a days journey from here and I suggest you go there.
Cliffin: Yes, I will head over there.
We then made our way to the stairs.
We then heard a scream from the second level. The Nerogue had escaped!
Ronon attacked him.
…But he was unsuccessful.
I grabbed on the rail and swung down.
I swung him around.
Ronon opened the jail door.
I threw him inside.
…And shut the door. I had a feeling this wouldn’t be the last time we fought.
As a new moderator, I can now judge MBCs. While this MOC is a great step in your personal lego work, I think this is an average in the grand scheme of things, so I will rate this a 2 pointer. While it is a good build, the landscape has little/no detail, and the stonework (first story) has to many colors. I think you may have stretched your collection with the other two stories, as they seem a little bland. The mushrooms are nice detailing, but it still feels empty. Perhaps add some timbers? Overall, this is a sound build, but could have some more detail.