The introduction of Farren Thorpe, the true Enalican.
About this creation
Farren had seen the goblins approaching from a distance. He now stood between them and what was the closest thing he had to a home. He was only there about 1 month out of a year, but yet he was quite fond of the place.
"What's your business?" he said, masking his dislike for the green scum.
"You name Farren? Goblins looking for man named Farren. Farren kill many goblins, goblins here for revenge."
"My name is Farren, and I am the man that you are looking for. Yet you will find no revenge here. What your people did to my people merited their death. Everyone of them deserved the fate I gave them."
"I will warn you, I am Enalican, and I will not have my home or my life taken from me."
"Goblins not giving you choice. Goblins kill you and burn your home. Goblins charge!"
The goblins charged forward, simultaneously, intent on killing Thorpe.
The leader of the men crashed swords with Farren, hungry for blood.
Farren easily used them goblin's momentum against him and threw him into a tree.
In a quick motion, Farren stabbed his sword into him and removed it.
The next goblin was hoping to catch Farren off guard, but the Enalican moved too quickly, and the goblin was cut down.
Farren threw the body of the goblin to the ground as the next one came at him.
The third goblin was ready, and blocked Farren's initial swing.
Yet it wasn't long before Farren found a whole in his defenses and stabbed him.
He pushed him to the ground as well as the fourth approached.
The Enalican ducked under goblin's blade.
Then swiftly cut into him.
The final one charged at him, and he barely had time to block the sword.
Farren went tumbling backward with the goblin on top of him. He managed to put his sword between himself and the goblin.
The goblin's own weight killed him as he landed on Farren's sowrd.
Farren Thorpe stood up, surveying his surroundings.
"I warned you," he said, angrily.
I suppose it's time to regroup with the crew at the docks he thought, They'll be wondering where I am
And he's a shot of the build.
So yeah, this is my second character. I have huge plans for him, and I hope you like him!
I should also mention that I finally got my BL order! :D
Nice job! I'm not sure about making the goblins so stupid in the story, but the story is still well done. As for the build, I feel like the house has too many colors. I would take out some of the dark tan (though not all of it) as well as the light bley pieces with those stripes. But everything else in this Moc is very good.
Yeah, all that tan and dark grey don't work perfectly together with the light grey. But... I really like the roof. The landscape looks pretty nice too. But, yeah, not so sure how well it works with the house. Some brown would probably help. A great MOC nonetheless Caleb!
Very nice! I really like the overhang on the second story. Also, I don't think the green landscape is ugly- it's well-textured, and has plenty of detail. I would have made only one story have the dk tan and dk grey, though, not both. It looks a little too detailed to me.
Quoting Asad .
The house is great, the colors flow together very nicely. THe landscape, however, needs some more color. It doesn't compliment the houe very well, making the build overall seem a bit bland.
I can see it now that you have pointed it out! Thanks for the input.