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Halloween 2014; Dark seduction
my 2014 Halloween story
About this creation
NARRATOR;
Hi, my name is Cliff, and I have quite a story to tell,
it all started when I moved in this town,
I did nt know about the history of the place,
until this incredible day...
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CLIFF;
Death-o-Minos day [Halloween] was coming, and I needed stuff for the house.
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CLIFF;
That s when I first saw her...
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CLIFF;
For some reason, I was just fascinated by her...
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CLIFF;
When she looked back, I faked interest in the news,
a pale ghotic style girlfriend was not my usual type... yet....
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CLIFF;
When I looked back... she was gone!
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CLIFF;
Then, the weirdest thing happened, I felt like a panic attack...
I could nt breathe!
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CLIFF;
I felt in love before, but, this was insane!
I had to run to look for her, and catch a little air!
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CLIFF;
At the pinacle of my despair...
I see her in front of that sinister cemetery...
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CLIFF;
I don t know what happened, I m sure she never opened that gate!
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CLIFF;
When I arrived, she was deep inside, and the gate was locked!
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CLIFF;
I felt a lot better, but, also sad, I then knew that she
'squatted' an abandoned building,
but, I could nt go there, who had that key anyways, the undertaker?
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CLIFF;
This was just not possible!!!
all I can think of, is that girl, and find her in that awful place!
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CLIFF;
I did nt sleep well that night, I had to know more about that place,
or I d go nuts!
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CLIFF;
I had been looking for a reason to talk to Andrea for a while now,
maybe I just need to see women, I have been single for a while...
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CLIFF;
While I talk to Andrea, I totally feel like I m talking to my sister...
but, what she tells me is pure horror...
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CLIFF;
1 rst of all, the old building was an old military hq,
which was donated to an old lady, which in turn, transformed it into an orphanage.
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CLIFF;
As sad as an orphanage can be, its 'sugarcoat' on what happened next...
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CLIFF;
For, some day, thinking that the old lady was rich,
a gang raided the orphanage.
and all perished in a mysterious fire in the basement where is the furnace!
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CLIFF;
I felt awful about this, and left Andrea right away...
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CLIFF;
Just to run as fast as I could to get there, again,
I then started to make up reasons to get in...
maybe that girl did nt know the story,
maybe she s cold, and would be better at my house,
and I ll spare you for a thousand more...
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CLIFF;
I felt stunned, like a brute or something,
I could nt think...
I would have eaten these bars if I had to...


but, it was easier to cross over so...
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CLIFF;
Now I was in!
where would that girl be?
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CLIFF;
As I tried to open the front door...
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.................................VISIONS............................





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CLIFF;
What was that? it s night time?
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CLIFF;
Those visions were so real, I felt like I was there,
all the horrors the children when through,
and... it was her...
she s the one who set the fire!
to stop the beatings of the gang, and she perished herself in it!
but... she was older when I first saw her...
I never could go back there eversince!
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CREATOR S LOG;
The funny thing is, I really met a girl while working on this,
it did nt turn great but, better, xd.
happy Halloween!




Comments

 I made it 
  February 13, 2015
Quoting Don Tuter thank you very much!
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  February 13, 2015
Love it! Awesome job!
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  February 10, 2015
Quoting Henrik Jensen thank you Henrik, I needed an excuse for him to be at the store, and thought that a 'siphon' would be the funniest tool, lol.
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  February 8, 2015
I saw your Halloween teaser, but somehow I missed it when you posted the story. It's really a scary story, and I shudder at the thought of the burned children, but the scene setup is as always masterfully executed. The illuminated cemetery is the icing on the cake. I wonder why Cliff carries a drainpipe plunger (or what you call it)?
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  January 16, 2015
Quoting Vinny Turbo merci beaucoup Vinny!
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  January 16, 2015
Salut Frank, je suis vraiment admiratif en voyant tout le travail de création pour chacune des histoires que tu postes !
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  January 8, 2015
Quoting J D thank you very much JD!
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  January 8, 2015
Oh my gosh, I love those graves! Excellent creation, once again!!
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  December 23, 2014
Quoting Romy British thank you very much Romy!
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  December 23, 2014
whoaaaW this is a masterpiece !
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  December 21, 2014
Quoting Lee Jones actually, I would nt be surprised I m older, lol, I m the same age as Mark Kelso... as for skills, we both have different strengths, you re just unbeatable in armies, lol, thanks Lee!
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  December 20, 2014
Probably half my age, and twice my skill. Amazing build here man, and thanks for sharing. Lee.
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  November 23, 2014
Quoting Dario Dipic ha, ha, maybe next year, I have a java bug, thank you very much Dario!
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  November 23, 2014
That cemetary is your masterpiece if you ask me. Again with so much details. As I listen to metal music, this is what I look for in MOCs hehe. And you really took the feel of it. Also, the ''red'' picture reminded me of the movie Blade. Give us more of this spooky creations, please. :)
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  November 10, 2014
Quoting Marc dZ thank you very much Marc!
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  November 10, 2014
Epic, superbly done. Great job, story teller!! The global effect is oustanding!!
cyberfrank 2010
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Michael Rutherford
  November 7, 2014
Cyberfrank! A haunting tail indeed! Happy Death-o-Minos!
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  November 7, 2014
Quoting Michael Rutherford he, he, thanks Mike, be well!
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  November 7, 2014
Quoting Ben Pitchford thank you very much Ben!
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  November 7, 2014
love the lighted pics and cemetery. congrats on another epic story!
cyberfrank 2010
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Tirrell Brown
  November 5, 2014
Awesome lighting and great Halloween story!
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  November 5, 2014
Quoting Thomas of Tortuga thank you Thomas! you make great stories as well!
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  November 5, 2014
Quoting Benaiah N. thank you very much Benaiah!
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  November 5, 2014
That story is very well-written. Nice work.
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  November 5, 2014
Wow. Nic job! I really like the story & the build! Very cool!
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  November 5, 2014
Quoting David . thank you very much David!
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  November 5, 2014
Well that's creepy. :P Nice story, and cool lighting effects!
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  November 5, 2014
Quoting Tirrell Brown thank you Tirrell!
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting Kermunklin the Giant Evil House Head you figure great stuff on your stories too, you surprise me each time, d.
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  November 3, 2014
Wow! That's some pretty thought out stuff there! I should have known!
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting Kermunklin the Giant Evil House Head thank you very much Kermunklin, #1; yes, it reminds the viewers that it s on Alta-5, there is always action and intrigue, d, #2 sometimes, you get 'infatuation over a woman, it can be mild, or strong, in Cliff s case, it s magic, he can t think or concentrate, he uses a wrench on his cat by distraction, and throws valuables on the street with his sheets still wrapped around his waist, d.
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  November 3, 2014
Awesome Halloween story. Total classic. As usual everything's a class act, but you really outdid yourself with the cemetery and the lighting. Two questions though: in panel 12, was that really a ninja being helped into the ambulance, or just some guy dressed as a ninja? Other question: in panel 13, it looked like the protagonist was adjusting his cat with a wrench. Does he have a mechanical cat? And if not, why would he be waving a wrench around so close to that cat? So three questions, I guess...great build.
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting Mark McPeek thank you very much Mark!
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting christophe corthay merci beaucoup Christophe!
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting Jimmie Martinez thank you very much Jimmie!
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  November 3, 2014
Very creepy! Excellent work!
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  November 3, 2014
Haaaaa le cimetière éclairé !!!! superbe !!!
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  November 3, 2014
Amazing work. Loved the storyline and the level of detail in this MOC is truly outstanding. 10/10.Keep up the good work.
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting Builder Allan ha, ha, you did nt miss a thing, xd, I wondered as I made it if someone would notice those, thanks Allan!
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting Stephan N thank you very much Stephan!
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting Gabor Horvath tanks Gabor, I know it has nt been done often, and Halloween was the perfect occasion to do this, xd.
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting LegoPredator ! thank you very much Legopredator!
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting Peter Szabo thanks Peter!
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  November 3, 2014
Quoting Deus "Big W." Otiosus thanks Deus, I agree, I was afraid people might not understand and be confused, I decided to leave conclusions to the viewer though...
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  November 3, 2014
Hehe, spooky! A belated happy halloween :-) Well done story and as always excellent backgrounds. I like the basement furnace, that gas can the girl is holding, your use of comedy and that lighting. The cemetary looks great! Oh, liking that vintage bike and the Mr. Kidd appearance too :-D
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  November 2, 2014
The story I find so far very good. The lighting effects are also very good. I love the cemetery, especially the big house. Very good work my friend.
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  November 2, 2014
Wow! The blue and green lights make it very cool! :)
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  November 2, 2014
Poor Clif, but cool story :)
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  November 2, 2014
Hi! Great work as always!
  November 2, 2014
I never considered lighting through solid colour, it looks better than expected... As for the story, it was pretty good and the revelation was clever. I do think though, that for a horror story, you gave too much information about the creepy elements and did not leave enough unanswered questions behind for the readers.
cyberfrank 2010
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Carlo Brunelli
  November 1, 2014
Fantastic!
cyberfrank 2010
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Black Smith
  November 1, 2014
Eerie, spooky lighting !....nicely Grimm
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Nick White he, he, a friend added me in a group of singles, but, it turned to be a triangle... xd, the cat and garbage scene was to demonstrate the degree of which he was affected, he tries to fix the cat with a tool, has his sheets stuck in his pyjama, and dumps valuables in the trash, he s gone mentally, thanks Nick!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting adam thelegofan rutland thank you Adam!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Topsy Creatori thanks, but, don t we all do that a little? instead of just one big scene, I make multiple, and add some funny touches, I must admit, I have a blast doing it, xd.
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Black Smith thank you Black Smith!
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  November 1, 2014
great story!:D
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  November 1, 2014
Fascination indulgence spotted... oh, you are the master of subtle titillation! ;)
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Nick White his mind is not there, he tries to fix the cat with a tool, xd, wait for the moderated version, thanks Nick!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Topsy Creatori I must have forgot to state it in the transition on moc pages, it s a beauty parlor, I ll correct it, did you like to see him drink from your produce? thank you very much Topsy!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Nick White my comment did nt come out, wait.
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Dr. Monster happy Halloween Doc, and thanks!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting El Barto ! thank you El Barto, same to you!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting LegoJediMaster . ha, ha, good one LGM! and thanks!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Clayton Marchetti thank you Clayton! I had to have funny twists, the plunger was irresistible, xd, I never tried flashbacks before, I should do one for christmas too.
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Nick Barrett thanks Nick!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Carlo Brunelli thank you very much Carlo!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Yann (XY EZ) thank you very much Yann!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Jack Riveorput thank you Jack!
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  November 1, 2014
Quoting Sven Jagdmann thanks, and happy Halloween Sven!
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  November 1, 2014
I love being treated to the views of the mansion and cemetary grounds! When I taught hs I found that the Goth kids in our area where really quite sensitive souls, so I am not surprised he fell for her! Now just what type of business is that Andrea in anyway?! Okay, you don't have to answer that! Now, moving on... love all your play with lighting. I'll sum it all up with one word... Fascinating! ;)
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  November 1, 2014
Where do you find these girls frank? There creepy! Awesome episode! The backround story of the place was creepy that they all burned! And in the biginning, what was he doing to the cat?! I love the lights under the grave stones! Good job!
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  November 1, 2014
Holy cow Frank! What an amazing post. I really love the story, and like Clayton said, the lights under the tombstones are brilliant. Really great job Frank, Happy Halloween.
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  November 1, 2014
Happy Halloween, Frank! Cool build with some really interesting lighting techniques. Spooky!
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  November 1, 2014
Wow nice story and the lights are fantastic! Where is Batman when you need him :D
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  November 1, 2014
Awesome Frank! I love those lights under the tombstones, positively genius! That was funny at the beginning of the story when Cliff was walking down the street with a plunger. The flashback scene in the basement was intense with the fire. Fantastic story Frank! Can't wait for next year
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  November 1, 2014
Great story, Frank - I enjoyed the various plot twists. And That house! Beautiful work.
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  November 1, 2014
That's a story! I think it is your best one! AMazing moc; the cementery looks so spooky! 5/5
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  November 1, 2014
Excellent story and moc.
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  November 1, 2014
Wow, that's again a great story my friend! I really love your passion for detail. The lights under the baseplate are a really cool touch. Thank you for this "spooky" Halloween story. The time i needed for reading the story and watching all the nice details on the pics was worth it :) Happy Halloween my friend!
 
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