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Darkness Born : (2) Rising Star
Orbiting high above the ruined skies of Coruscant following the battle, the cruiser Republic Star stands watch. New spreads that General Grievous is dead. The Clone Wars are finally at an end...
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19 Years Before the Battle of Yavin Mere Moments Before Order 66


Commander Froze walks down the corridor to see the Jedi Master standing idle, thinking like always.
Commander Froze: "General, you looked concerned?" the clone states slightly puzzled.
The Jedi Master stops, realizing he had been lost in meditation.
Jedi Master Stark: "Froze, it has been far too long. I can't remember the last time we had a moment like this."



Stark: "Recently I have been thinking about retiring. Going out and finding my own place in the stars. Away from the Republic, even the Order. I don't believe I can fit in a peacetime Republic after what we have had to go through." Stark says solemnly.
Froze stares back, even for a clone like him who was breed to think freely, he never thought about it.
Froze: "Sir, If theres any place to be. I think it would be Naboo."
Froze's holocommunicator begins to beep.



~The time has come, execute Order 66.~
Froze knew what that meant. He did not know why, but he could not do it. Stark was his friend. His mentor. His General.



Froze: "We have to leave now, we have to get you out of here."
Froze says with haste. Perplexed Stark stares back at him.
Stark: "Whats wrong--"



Froze: "There is no time to explain. I can hear them coming."
Froze says with a twist of fear in his voice.



Officer: "By order of the Supreme Chancellor, I here by charge Jedi Master Stark with treason. He is to be executed immediately commander."
The officer states sternly as if he had ice in his veins.



Froze: "I never been the best at following orders so..."



Froze: "I'll think I will pass. "
Suddenly Froze opens fire on the detachment of clone troopers. Killing them instantly.



Officer: "I order you to—"
The officer stops as Stark's blade ignites and severs the officer's hand clean off. He falls down in pain.



Stark: "I have to warn the Jedi Temple. I can feel the wound that is growing in the force. This is happening all across the galaxy."
Stark says with genuine fear in his voice. Froze has never heard the General this afraid.
Froze: "We have to get to a shuttle."



Froze: "No you have to go to the temple, I will hold them off General. Go!"
Froze exclaims with all the courage in his heart. Stark stands there in disbelief.
Stark: "No you are coming with..."
Stark trails off as more clones emerge from the corridors.



Froze: "Go! I will hold them back for as long as I can."
Froze shouts. The clone valiantly holds the line, taking down clones one by one.



More clones continue to come. Then a clone commander clad in red armor marches out among the grunts.



Froze fought hard, but he was no match. Froze is shot in the chest. His wounds cause him to collapse.



Looking up, Froze notices that the clone who shot him was no other than his pod brother—Captain Blaze.
Froze: "(cough) (cough) How could you betray the General?"
Froze struggles to say. Blaze just stares down at his brother.



Captain Blaze: "Patch him up. I want him transferred and ready for interrogation. Put him on the next shuttle to the Slab."



An Admiral dressed in a uniform not seen in the Republic before enters the room.
Admiral: "Congratulations, Commander. Take the traitors place. The Empire will have need of you in the coming days. Your only priority is to find the Jedi Master. He must be returned alive."



Blaze: "Yes ma'am"



Stark can sense all that is taking place. All the deaths in the galaxy. He can sense the pain in his old friend. His holocommunicator began to relay an emergency signal from the Jedi Temple.



Stark knows what he must do.
Stark: "I must regroup with the other Jedi."

Author's Comments

Now that Order 66 has begun the story is going to shift towards the Dark Times and the rise of the Empire. I hope you all are enjoying the story so far!

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Chapter List
Darkness Born : Prologue
Darkness Born : A New Age
Darkness Born : Rising Star
Darkness Born : Old Wounds
Darkness Born : Hidden Threat
Darkness Born : Bloodline
Darkness Born : Intensive Care
Darkness Born : Another Man's Trash
Darkness Born : Destiny

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Comments

 I like it 
  September 27, 2015
Hey can you add my Sig fig to it. He is a clone. No order 66.
 I made it 
  February 18, 2015
Quoting Brick Boy This is great. I am usually not a fan of Star Wars fan fiction, but your story and the imagery are done very well. I will definitely join the group!
Thank you so much!
 I like it 
  January 13, 2015
This is great. I am usually not a fan of Star Wars fan fiction, but your story and the imagery are done very well. I will definitely join the group!
 I made it 
  January 11, 2015
Quoting Kermunklin the Giant Evil House Head Story's developing nicely, although I must say I was hoping Froze would get away. Oh well...price of valor and all that. Good stuff.
Sometimes a good clone has to make the sacrifice. RIP Fives and Echo haha
 I like it 
  January 11, 2015
Story's developing nicely, although I must say I was hoping Froze would get away. Oh well...price of valor and all that. Good stuff.
 I made it 
  January 9, 2015
Quoting Caleb R. Just looked through a lot of your comics. I must say, your graphics are better than almost anything on MOCpages other than El Barto. Very nicely done, keep up the good work!
Thanks you so much that means alot!
 I made it 
  January 9, 2015
Quoting Sam .(Won't be on due to data reasons for a while) Love it. I enjoy how you are retelling Order 66 Stories but with better editing and everything. Wonderful.
Thanks so much. Not many people remember Order 66 Stories so I took my early and favorite stories and adapted it into Darkness Born.
 I like it 
  January 9, 2015
Just looked through a lot of your comics. I must say, your graphics are better than almost anything on MOCpages other than El Barto. Very nicely done, keep up the good work!
 I like it 
  January 8, 2015
Love it. I enjoy how you are retelling Order 66 Stories but with better editing and everything. Wonderful.
 I made it 
  January 8, 2015
Quoting Calvin . Wow, great effects, what did you use to do it?
Thanks! So far only CS6 Photoshop
 I like it 
  January 8, 2015
Wow, great effects, what did you use to do it?
Master Stark
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Brickbuild 54
  January 7, 2015
Great job! cannot wait to read more.
 I made it 
  January 7, 2015
Quoting Benjamin Olson Very, very good! Looking forward to the next part. Froze actually reminds me of what they say happened to Rex. Looks like they were cut from the same cloth.
Oh just you wait and see the true Origins ;)
 I like it 
  January 7, 2015
Very, very good! Looking forward to the next part. Froze actually reminds me of what they say happened to Rex. Looks like they were cut from the same cloth.
 I made it 
  January 7, 2015
There was a huge upload error and there where duplicate photos but I have fixed that now! Sorry for the mess up!
 I made it 
  January 7, 2015
Quoting Brickbuild 54 Great job! cannot wait to read more.
Thanks!
 I made it 
  January 7, 2015
Quoting Dark Mercenary Kydan Witress If I haven't said this already, then I'll just keep saying it....amazing haha! The hologram really catches my eye. Very well done with the chapter. Keep going! ;)
Haha thanks! I didnt have the Hologram Lego piece so I had to improvise.
 I like it 
  January 7, 2015
If I haven't said this already, then I'll just keep saying it....amazing haha! The hologram really catches my eye. Very well done with the chapter. Keep going! ;)
 
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