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LOM-RC-"Onboard the Valiant."
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It was nearly nightfall when Jako and Jaron reach the ship The Valiant.




After Jaron exchanged his name with the crew who consist of a two men Fenton and Weston
"So Jako we should make landing at dawn." Said Weston (the captain of the ship)
"Good, we should be a few days ahead of the rest of the men." replied Jako
"You know him?" Asked Jaron pointing at Weston
"Yes, why else would he be on my ship." replied Jako
"YOU OWN A SHIP?!" said Jaron completely dumbfounded at what Jako had just said
"I own nine, they were all my fathers though." plainly remarked Jako
Jaron stumbled backward and nearly fainted

"Is you friend sick or something." asked Weston
"I'm not really sure." Replied Jako
"Ah, I see," Replied Weston "I found this in the wing of Jaron's Glider." He said then pulled out a sword

Jaron seeing the sword walked over to Weston
"That is a nice sword." Jaron said bluntly
"Take it," said Weston "I have no use for another sword."


Jaron took it and swung it very clumsily.
"How do people use these heavy things?" asked Jaron
"it takes a lot of practice and strength." replied Weston
"oh... I hate practicing." said Jaron

"You'll get used to." said Jako who the quietly added "eventually."
Jaron who had heard that Jako added something asked
"what did you say?"
"What oh nothing." Replied Jako
"well its getting late I think we should be getting to the bunks," said Weston
"Ok I'll take first watch with Fenton." said Jako


:--:Two Hours Later:--:

when will the Weston and Jaron cone up its felt like its been five hours already thought Jako he kept on thinking until his thoughts were interrupted by a loud THUMP


Jako quickly turned around to see a large Halidra
"My master wishes to speak to you' Jako." said the Halidra
"Who are you, and who is your master." Asked Jako fingering the hilt of his sword
"That wouldn't be wise." stated the Halidra "you are surrounded by 30 of my men. and as for you questions my master is the leader of the league of shadows and I and just his humble servant."
"Ah, the league of shadows. so why does your master want to meet with me?" asked Jako
"I do not know why but you will meet him at the library at Elpis in a weeks time." he replied.

the Halidra then jumped off of the boat and into the icy water below

Fenton who had been watching from a few feet away walked up to Jako and asked.
"Are you going to meet with him, It could be a trap?" asked Fenton
" I'm not sure I'm going to have to consult with Matthias about this." said Jako
just then they heard Jaron and Weston coming up to change the watch
"well I guess you probably wont sleep very much tonight due to that." said Fenton who then walked over to the hatch opened it and walked down and Jako followed.
:--:The End:--:



the only bonus pic of The Valiant my first and most likely my last boat to build



Comments

 I like it 
  March 26, 2015
Nice ship design!
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  March 25, 2015
Great job! I really like the story! Can't wait for more!
 I like it 
  March 24, 2015
Nice build. Though the back could use some curve.
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  March 24, 2015
Quoting Hildigrim Took Nice! Jaron is a total klutz :P
yup :P
 I like it 
  March 24, 2015
Very good build, man! And the story is coming along nicely! Keep it up!
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  March 24, 2015
Nice! Jaron is a total klutz :P
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  March 24, 2015
Lol, nice dialogue :P Also, good work on the prow.
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  March 24, 2015
Very nice ship! The prow looks a bit spindly, and it could use some more color, but other then that, it looks great! A lot more ship-like then the average Roman Galley I turn out. :P
 I like it 
  March 24, 2015
Pretty nice RC!
 
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