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"You call yourselves our benefactors, our "modernized" technological saviors, but you are all just pompous, greedy, uncaring swine!"- Young Jes to an Eravian audience.
About this creation
Name: Jessica "Jes" Albatross
Species: Neo Aeonian
Race: Neo
Gender: Female
Age: ~32
Titles: La Buse (The Buzzard)
Occupation: "Private Defense Contractor"(Mercenary)
Element: None
Weapons: Assault Rifle "Venus Magnum", Handgun "Venus Minum", Ferros Talonshield
Abilities: Agile
Theme: None yet (if you have a suggestion, leave a link in the comments)
Personality: Sarcastic and cynical, down-to-earth and practical.
Bio:
(First, an intro into my new storyline)
In the year 30470, the United Republic of the Eravian Populace (UREP) made interstellar contact with their neighboring twin planet Aeos. Mistakenly believing the planet to carry no sentient, technologically advanced life, a colonization fleet was sent to the planet. Upon arrival, the fleet discovered the existence of the native Aeonian population. Believing them to be primitive technologically, the fleet attempted planet-wide colonization, only to discover the Aeonians' control over ether and their stubborn resistance to their potential rulers. To aide in the takeover, the Eravians created a virus known as the "Descolada"* to infect the Aeonians and remove their ability to control ether. Upon the completion of the virus, the planet was taken within half a year as rebel groups fell, one by one.

Several centuries later, the existence of an pure-ether Aeonian was discovered and confirmed. Thinking that the Descolada could either be losing its effect, or that the Aeonians could be evolving around the virus, the upper echelons of the UREP hired two Aeonian mercenaries to take out the Aeonian species's only chance at redemption and freedom.

*"Descolada" is the Eravian term for "withering."

(Now, for the actual bio)
Born centuries after the Aeonian takeover at the hands of the Eravians, Jes grew up used to seeing the latter species as the "controllers." Orphaned at an early age, Jes learned to house an enmity towards the Eravians, viewing them as pompous, greedy pigs with no concern for those they forcefully control. After aging out of the orphanage system, Jes was left to her own devices, and moved out west, where cities were less "modernized" and Eravians were scarce. There, she made a name for herself as a private defense contractor and mercenary, often protecting trains carrying valuables or hunting down escaped criminals of all trades.

Years after starting her new life, Jes was contacted by the United Republic of the Eravian Populace with an offer to track down and kill a "Rank 5 Criminal"*, and was offered several million pin** *** for completion of the job. She has since been paired with gunmaster Jacob "Zenith" Hexadon and sent on the hunt for their target, an entity named "Dark Aeon".

*Criminals within the Eravian colonies are ranked on a scale of 1 to 5. 1's are petty crimes and the like, while 5's are made up of mass-murderes, serial killers, and rebels.
**pin is used as the standard Eravian-backed currency. 1 pin would roughly equal 10 U.S. dollars.
***To get a rough estimate, the average Aeonian's monthly income is ~10 pin. An Eravian's, meanwhile, often well exceeds 1000 pin.









With the "Venus Magnum", her assault rifle.


J: Call me Bond, Jessica Bond.
Me: No
J: )':






With a Thornroot plant. Her favorite.


Replacing a magazine. Oh, I forgot to take a better picture of it, but Jes's handgun holster and a spare magazine are on her legs. Quick, scroll back up!


All of her equiptment.


With Tect, one of the rebels. And no, he is not the "target". We all know who the target is (or at least, you all think you do :D)
J: YES! No longer the short one!
T: ...Shut up or I'll make you a bullet-cushion.

In 4D:
Well, new story base came out sooner than I had hoped. Expect a couple of stories soon. School is 99% over for me (summer reading and an AP Bio assignment), so I will have no excuses other than procrastination. And Clash of Clans.

'Til next time,
Dark Aeon


EDIT: V4.1

Added tires around the waist and wrists for bulk, the assault rifle has an extended clip, and there are yellow jumper plates added to the backs of the lower legs (barely visible from this angle).

EDIT: V4.2

Changed pieces in the arms, added bulk to the lower legs, moved the handgun holster to her upper leg.


A better look at the legs.



Comments

 I made it 
  June 13, 2015
Quoting Wertman 8 Very nice MOC! I love the hair idea! My only complaint would be that those shins are too skinny. Other than that, it's a great build!
Thanks! I will get to the shins in V4.2.
 I like it 
  June 13, 2015
Very nice MOC! I love the hair idea! My only complaint would be that those shins are too skinny. Other than that, it's a great build!
 I made it 
  June 12, 2015
Quoting Orthos the Repented, (Destroyer of Mercenoid Prototype 9.2) I was simply implying that if the Eravians try to take control of the SeKraata they will meet resistance. Like, an entire EMPIRE kind of resistance.
Understood. Luckily, the Eravians as a population are quite stupid when it comes to dealing with other sentient species. The only reason that they managed to enslave the Aeonians is that they had that wee bit of technology to engineer a virus. Versus the SeKraata, they would be a pushover.
 I made it 
  June 12, 2015
Quoting Orthos the Repented, (Destroyer of Mercenoid Prototype 9.2) I was simply implying that if the Eravians try to take control of the SeKraata they will meet resistance. Like, an entire EMPIRE kind of resistance.
Understood. Luckily, the Eravians as a population are quite unintelligent when it comes to dealing with other sentient species. The only reason that they managed to enslave the Aeonians is that they had that wee bit of technology to engineer a virus. Versus the SeKraata, they would be a pushover.
 I like it 
  June 12, 2015
I was simply implying that if the Eravians try to take control of the SeKraata they will meet resistance. Like, an entire EMPIRE kind of resistance.
 I made it 
  June 11, 2015
Quoting Kermunklin the Giant Evil House Head Dude, she is wicked! Quite a cool backstory as well. Looking forward to the new tales!
Thanks!
 I like it 
  June 11, 2015
Dude, she is wicked! Quite a cool backstory as well. Looking forward to the new tales!
 I made it 
  June 11, 2015
Quoting Orthos the Repented, (Destroyer of Mercenoid Prototype 9.2) SeKraata + Eravians = MASS DESTRUCTION AND POSSIBLY THE END OF THE UNIVERSE!!!
*Thumbs up*. Although your statement just implied that the SeKraata are either inherintly evil, or just antagonistic. Which, judging by your work, neither case applies.
 I like it 
  June 11, 2015
SeKraata + Eravians = MASS DESTRUCTION AND POSSIBLY THE END OF THE UNIVERSE!!!
 I made it 
  June 11, 2015
Quoting Makuta's Descendant - Awesome! Xavier: 'I like it...a lot *smiles creepily*'
J: What you say 'bout me, boy? *pulls out sniper rifle and shoots Xavier* Headshot, +150xp.
  June 11, 2015
Awesome! Xavier: 'I like it...a lot *smiles creepily*'
 I made it 
  June 11, 2015
Quoting Drakis 555 you play clash of clans? dude i love that game! i am level 83 town hall level 8 how bout you?
Lvl 53 TH8. Same name over there as here.
Dark Aeon
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Fedora Art Studios
  June 10, 2015
Awesome story! I can't wait to see what your cunning mind has come up with! Jes looks really cool and I dig the new yellow and black color scheme. Really good proportions, but the connection to the hips is a bit thin, just add a tire and you're good.
 I like it 
  June 10, 2015
you play clash of clans? dude i love that game! i am level 83 town hall level 8 how bout you?
 I made it 
  June 10, 2015
Quoting Hildigrim Took That's pretty epic...
Thanks!
 I like it 
  June 10, 2015
That's pretty epic...
 I made it 
  June 10, 2015
Quoting Fedora Art Studios Awesome story! I can't wait to see what your cunning mind has come up with! Jes looks really cool and I dig the new yellow and black color scheme. Really good proportions, but the connection to the hips is a bit thin, just add a tire and you're good.
Thanks.
 I made it 
  June 10, 2015
Quoting Caleb M. Cool moc. Although I did notice the skinny lower legs. A tire could go on the body. Maybe a tire on the wrists too?
Thanks. Now, to see where all of my tires went...
 I like it 
  June 10, 2015
Cool moc. Although I did notice the skinny lower legs. A tire could go on the body. Maybe a tire on the wrists too?
 
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