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LOM MIssion 2 - Josephc123 vs. Caleb M.
Well, here it is. I inevitably went overboard with back story again. Just read it! It's not too long. Hope y'all like it! Oh, and good luck to you Caleb, and may the best span win!
About this creation
Zeergo leaned over a lavish balcony, admiring a fantastic view of the sunrise from the third story of his mansion in the Spanish capital city of Spanavia. The giant yellow orb of light seemed to be rising out of the ground, way off on the flat horizon. The city was built in the far northeastern region of the Heizrach Wastes, away from all other habitable places on the planet Mardon. The city's water was supplied by the Keith River over 50 miles away through a series of underground canals that lay deep under the dry desert sand. They are believed to have been built by the first settlers of the planet thousands of years ago. The city was relatively modern, with running water and other life sustaining commodities, and Spans lived in modest comfort. Spotting a group of young fe-span's gathered behind the large main gate to his property, he stood to his full height, and with one quick twist of his head, sent his flowing red hair flying in the cool morning air. Smiling at the various swoons and giggles that erupted from the gate, he was interrupted by obnoxious throat clearing noises in the room behind him. Turning around, he saw his loyal assistant and friend Kronos standing with a thick binder in one hand.

"Lo siento, amigo! I did not see you there."

He moved to his desk and sat in his favorite chair.

"You wanted to speak to me. Sir?"

Zeergo remembered now. It was time to get down to business.

"Yes, I did. It has been a few months since any major assault on the Dandos, no?"

"That would be correct sir", Kronos responded. And Zeergo continued.

"Well, I believe we are long overdue for a victory."

Rising from his chair, he began to pace around his lavish study, with walls covered from floor to ceiling in books, charts, and maps.

"What is the situation with our Dando friend?"

"The one known as Commander Dan is currently guarding one of the five walls of the Dando nation."

"And is there any activity from ze target?"

"None at all, sir."

"What does that mean?"

Kronos slightly hesitated before answering.

"I mean that the target shows no signs of activity. Our spies have watched him for days non-stop and all they have seen is him just sitting there in front of the wall. Some of them think that he's dead because he sits so still. One span actually threw a twig at him, and he didn't even flinch."

Zeergo stood, processing the information for a moment.

"So how do you know he's not dead?"

"We have an agent that can sense life force, sir. And the target seems to have some."

Pondering silently again, Zeergo finally returned to his desk.

"Perfecto! This is a good opportunity for us!"

Kronos' eyes sparkled slightly.

"Will you be sending me sir?"

Zeergo knew his assistant was eager to see action. He had found the lad laying along the road on one of his numerous travels many years ago, beaten and badly abused. Taking sympathy on the boy, which was unlike Zeergo especially since he was hairless, he took him in and raised him like a son and as a master, teaching him the secrets of the assassin's trade. He turned out to have amazing skills in long range combat, and eventually took up the bow as his primary weapon. He excelled in all areas, and Zeergo was happy save one critical point. The boy couldn't grow hair! And he couldn't get him to wear a wig either.

"No, not until you wear the wig I gave you last year!"

"But Master....!" , Kronos started to exclaim, but the icy cold gaze that he received quickly made him revise his words.

"...I mean Sir! This would be a perfect opportunity for me to test out my new weapon!"

Zeergo shook his head.

"There is no need. An opponent such as this does not pose a challenge for you. Give this assignment to one of our new gringos!"

Kronos, though disappointed by his master's judgement, had learned long ago to remain obedient to him. He opened up his binder.

"Specifically, which one sir?"

A small smile creeped onto Zeergo's face, followed by some strange spasm-like movements from his eyebrows. He looked toward the large double doors leading out of the room.

"You may enter now."

The doors opened and a large creature strode into the room. Fully clad in heavy armor, complete with a menacing looking helmet, this 8ft tall monster was unlike any span Kronos had seen before. It looked clearly reptilian, with large claws, double-jointed legs, and a large armored tail complete with sharp spikes. He stood at attention and addressed Zeergo.

"Corporal Rawgr reporting, sir."

"No need to address me like that, compadre! This is an assassin's guild, not ze military!"

Zeergo was right. Officially, the Spans had no organized military forces. Instead, the entire nation was run and sustained by guilds of assassins, mercenaries, and even a few specializing in thievery. However, in order to keep peace between them, the five largest or most powerful guilds ruled together. The Spanish Brotherhood was one of these guilds, led by none other than Zeergo himself.

"I assume you have been briefed on the mission, no?"

A small nod came from the helmet.

"That is correct sir."

"Good! I expect positve results, especially with your impressive combat record."

"Thank you sir. It is an honor to work for you."

"Can you remove your helmet?", Kronos interrupted. "It is disrespectful to hide your face from your employer."

Zeergo touched his face with one hand.

"Ayos Mio, hijo!"

"No, it's alright," Rawgr calmly interrupted.

Removing the large helmet, a red, snake-like head was revealed, with slender slitted eyes that glowed with subtle anger. A sneer appeared on his wide mouth, revealing rows of jagged teeth, followed by a sharp glare at the foolish assistant, who remained unfazed by the display.

"Satisfied, punk?"

"Very much so, thank you," Kronos answered with a smile.

A loud chuckle arose from Zeergo at the two interacting assassins.

"Fantastico! You both are such good friends already!"

He then addressed Rawgr with a light grin.

"I wish you luck in your mission, Colonel! You are dismissed."

Donning his helmet, the giant lizard acknowledged with a quick nod.

"Thank you again for the opportunity, sir."

After Rawgr had left, Zeergo rose from his chair and began to head for the door as well. Seeing the apparent dissapontment on his assistant's face, he stopped and put a hand on his shoulder.

"Do not look so glum, hijo. There will be many more challenges and many more enemies in the future. You trust me, no?"

"Of course sir."

Zeergo gave Kronos a light smack in the face.

"No! You don't trust anyone! You are an assassin! Remember what I teach you, tonto!"

"Sorry sir."

"Don't worry, amigo," Zeergo insisted as he ushered the young protege out of the room. "You can make it up to me by trying on the wig I just finished making for you!"

-EL FIN-

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Now onto the bio!


Name: Rawgr

Species: some sort of rahkshi-based hybrid?

Gender: Male

Affiliation: Span

Rank: Colonel

Powers: spontaneous combustion

Favorite activities: blowing up objects, blowing up people, blowing up objects and people, blowing up people's hopes and dreams (not necessarily in that order)

Catchphrase: "Don't solve problems. Just blow them up..."

Weapons: Primary: Staff of (you guessed it) Combustion
Secondary: Tail Mace, claws, etc.

Bio: Rawgr is an expert in explosives and pyrotechnics. He is an experienced bomb maker and uses such bombs to defeat his opponents. His skills in strategy are modest, as he would much rather charge in and blow everything to kingdom come. However, he is able to follow orders quite well, which has gained him much repute from his superiors. His staff of combustion creates special sparks or embers that can be spread and controlled at will by the user, which can in turn be detonated by the user with lethal intensity. Rawgr can also use these explosive embers to maneuver around the battlefield, as he is immune to the staff's power. There's nothing like a powerful explosion to propel yourself at your opponent!

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(My favorite pic)
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(Unedited title pic)
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(His neck can extend and retract like a turtle)
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(If you haven't noticed yet, there is an HF head down there that serves as his heart or something)

Fourth wallpaper: Well not much to say here. Quite frankly, this guy was pretty much thrown together in a hurry, but I think he's not half bad. Nothing super comical this time. I hope the story wasn't too much either. Who am I kidding, right? I also wanted to ask Caleb what the name of the river is that runs throught the span territory as well as the name of the capital city I mentioned in the story. Let me know Caleb! Anyhow, I specifically did not illustrate the confrontation because I want to hear from you guys who should win! And the judges too... So, please leave a like and or a comment and see y'all tomorrow! Good night and goodbye!

Edit: I fixed the tail to satisfy those who commented. I am limited on parts, so this is the best I could come up with. As I stated in the group, Zeergo will be leaving for three weeks starting July 9th, so I may not be here for the third mission. I hope that upon his return, he does not find Mardon completely devoid of life. (You understand what I'm trying to say) if I don't post or comment til then, happy Fourth of July and see y'all at the end of the month!
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(Oh! Also added some armor in the hip areas!)



Comments

 I made it 
  July 2, 2015
Quoting RaptorTalon ~ much better!
Yay!
  July 1, 2015
much better!
 I made it 
  June 28, 2015
Quoting Toa Gaim Sweet moc! The helmet is a nice touch! =D
Thanks! It was a last minute experiment actually!
 I like it 
  June 28, 2015
Sweet moc! The helmet is a nice touch! =D
 I made it 
  June 28, 2015
Quoting RaptorTalon ~ Nice! but that tail...
Ok, it seems that I'm receiving a pretty clear message here. I guess I can redo the tail. When I get to it that is...
 I made it 
  June 28, 2015
Quoting Caleb M. Awesome! I'm up for a challenge! A big one too. As for the questions. The river is River Keth. And the capital is Spanavia. (Span-navy-a)
Ok, thanks! Looking forward to your entry! Zeergo will be waiting...
 I like it 
  June 27, 2015
Awesome! I'm up for a challenge! A big one too. As for the questions. The river is River Keth. And the capital is Spanavia. (Span-navy-a)
 I like it 
  June 27, 2015
Nice! but that tail...
 I like it 
  June 27, 2015
Cool story and a monstrously good character build. That dude looks really mean! My only criticism is the tail, which as pointed out below does look too thick. If I was making this dude, I'd just go ahead and give him two tails, potentially making him even deadlier. Great MOC though!
 I made it 
  June 26, 2015
Quoting Wertman 8 A very nice MOC man! I love how well armoured this guy is! There does seem to be an issue with proportions though; I think that the torso is too long and the neck is a little too short. Other than that, it's great! The dialogue at the beginning was nice and funny, and the description of Rawgr's favourite hobbies was hilarious. Nice stuff, good luck!
Thank you! I know what you mean. What you're seeing is long arms and slightly short legs on a long torso. I kept it that way to give a sort of over armored or armor suit look. Kinda WOW style armoring with warped dimensions.
 I like it 
  June 26, 2015
A very nice MOC man! I love how well armoured this guy is! There does seem to be an issue with proportions though; I think that the torso is too long and the neck is a little too short. Other than that, it's great! The dialogue at the beginning was nice and funny, and the description of Rawgr's favourite hobbies was hilarious. Nice stuff, good luck!
 I made it 
  June 26, 2015
Quoting Chouju_X [SPAM] I like Rawgr, but his tail seems a little thick. Other than that he's great!
Thick tails for lots of armor! But I know what you mean, Thanks!
  June 26, 2015
I like Rawgr, but his tail seems a little thick. Other than that he's great!
 
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