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Star Wars Short #1 - The Mistake
So while the nineteenth chapter is very close to being finished, including another random creation of mine, I have decided to provide a small something for all of you. After browsing through the internet and video streams, I had come across a movie that I had watched while growing up. A certain scene intrigued me so much, I wanted to make it into a Star Wars scene for the series. You can even say that this is just a rough draft of the next season next year. Hopefully you guys enjoy this small and perhaps tiny comic script I have provided and I shall see you afterwards ;)
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(Korriban, Unknown, Year ?? BBY)

The Grand Inquisitor walks up towards the weak and frighten academy student, who was bent down on his knees and trembling. The other students who were witnessing this event had no idea what the Inquisitor would do. Thoughts raced through their very minds, unable to come up with a theory on what he would do to the poor student.

The Inquisitor looks down to the frighten young man, glaring at him with his one good eye as his red robotic eye stared at him, almost as if trying to pierce into his flesh.

Inquisitor- Ah, now...tell your master the truth.

His eyes somewhat widened, his body begins to shake from the fear he was feeling. His eyes beginning to fill with water as tears began to fall down. He was starting to sob.

Inquisitor- Say it...say it...

Student- *Sobbing* I-I...I did it...

Inquisitor- made a mistake, didn't you?

Student- *Sobbing* Y-Yes...I did...I-I did...

Inquisitor- Hmm...

He turns to his elite guards that had been standing behind the young male student, awaiting for the Inquisitor's orders. What came out of his mouth was unexpected to many as he ushered his hand towards them.

Inquisitor- Execute him.

Student- *Crying in shock* N-No master! No!

Inquisitor- Immediately...

Student- No please master, no---

Within seconds, before the poor student could finish his sentence, the guards immediately had raised their guns and shot the young man from the back, ultimately ending his life.

The Inquisitor, even though would have enjoyed this, did not give any emotion to it. He just looked back to the new students of the academy and began to speak firmly and boldly.

Inquisitor- Let this be a lesson to all of you here! This is the punishment for those who have made errors! The Imperial Academy does not tolerate failure, nor do we acknowledge those who break the rules and their masters! If you fail under any reason, you will also be in this state!

He then starts to walk towards to the Academy building, with his guards following immediately behind him. He gave one last final statement before disappearing into the building.

Inquisitor- Welcome to the I.G. (Inquisitorious Gazerous) Academy everyone! You are all now serving under the Emperor's Galactic Empire!

A little bonus clip of the small scene. Here we have both the front and back of the entry way that would lead to the Imperial Academy. I actually thought this turned out pretty well...but then, what do I know?

If anyone can guess which little scene and movie it's off from, then you are awesome! And who knows, perhaps a shout out on the next comic lol :P

This was something that I thought I would perhaps try out, see if any of you like it at all. I will not be able to have the free time I usually have for writing now due to a new part time job I have found, but I will do my best to keep up with posts. So if you like to see future shorts such as this, perhaps maybe one or two a week, then please, let me know in the comments below if you wish to see more like these later on. Honestly, I wouldn't mind doing something like these for you guys to keep ya' busy. But then, it's all up to you wonderful people.

Well that will about do it for now. So thank you guys for your splendid support on the series and on my other variant creations, and please, continue to do so. And as always, I hope you all have an amazing and fan-tucking-tastic day/night! See ya' on the next one ;)

- Director K.W.


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  January 4, 2016
love the build and story!.
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  September 28, 2015
Cool story...brutal!
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  September 25, 2015
THAT MEAN SON- of a gun. Not the other thing... Oh, can you maybe join my group?
Director K.W.
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  September 24, 2015
N-No Master Why!?!, Nice job, that hallway though so nice.
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  September 24, 2015
Excellent piece, Director! Lol, nice to know you are still active. Can't wait for episode 19!
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  September 24, 2015
Very intimidating villain!
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  September 24, 2015
Nice! I like the story!
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