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Y'know, I should stop making promises about deadlines! This is the thing I said I'd post on the Tuesday gone, my entry for the Bionicle/HF Comic Competition. A little suplementary story to the Contenders!
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Characters in this issue:

Galia
Kuvago the Devastator
Tyranca
Anut and Skartau
'Slave Driver'
Koi

So, as I said, this was an entry for The Bionicle/HF Comic Competition!, run by Chains Productions.

If you're interested in this, it's not too late to join the contest! Round 2 will be starting soon, and this isn't eliminatory, so you can join whatever round you want. Hope to see more people posting in the group!

Thank you very much for reading this, I hope you enjoyed! See you later.



Comments

 I made it 
  October 10, 2015
Quoting Toa Gaim Awesome start!
Thanks! Though this is just a one off, most likely...
 I like it 
  October 1, 2015
Awesome start!
 I made it 
  September 28, 2015
Quoting Legobob 29 Wow! This was a great comic, well done! The story is great, the captions are good, and the edited effects in some parts are top notch. Really well done, Wert!
Thanks me old friend! :D
 I made it 
  September 28, 2015
Quoting Lagrais The ? I love it!
Thanks man!
 I made it 
  September 28, 2015
Quoting Dragoneye Creations Nice job, Werty. I'm a bit curious as to what do you use to make your comics. Also, I like the way you implement action and dialogue into the same scenes, also like every anime ever
Thanks! As I told Windfall, I use GIMP (GNU Image Manipulation Programme) to edit my photos. Heh, I do like my dialogue :P
 I like it 
  September 28, 2015
Wow! This was a great comic, well done! The story is great, the captions are good, and the edited effects in some parts are top notch. Really well done, Wert!
 I like it 
  September 27, 2015
I love it!
 I like it 
  September 27, 2015
Nice job, Werty. I'm a bit curious as to what do you use to make your comics. Also, I like the way you implement action and dialogue into the same scenes, also like every anime ever
 I made it 
  September 27, 2015
Quoting Sunder Great job! The action and posing is brilliant! Keep it up :)
Thanks Sunder! :)
 I like it 
  September 27, 2015
Great job! The action and posing is brilliant! Keep it up :)
 I made it 
  September 27, 2015
Quoting Toa Vahi Never seen anything like this.... Awesome job!
Thanks Vahi!
 I made it 
  September 27, 2015
Quoting Windfall the Wanderer Also, I've got a question. Undoubtedly you've heard this before, but what program do you use to make these comics?
I use GIMP, the GNU Image Manipulation Programme.
 I made it 
  September 27, 2015
Quoting RaptorTalon ~ Also, There is a bit of a distracting typo. She says 'spa' rather then 'spar'
Whoops. I'll fix it when I can...
 I made it 
  September 27, 2015
Quoting RaptorTalon ~ YES! Came home to another amazing comic from Wertman! Amazing work!
Thanks Raptor!
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Alex Christofferson
  September 26, 2015
Sweet! I like all the different characters!
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 I like it 
Toa Blizzard The Storyteller
  September 26, 2015
Brilliant work! I never expected someone as violently ruthless as 'Devastator' to actually feel remorseful. I look forward to your entry for round 2!
 I like it 
  September 26, 2015
Never seen anything like this.... Awesome job!
  September 26, 2015
Also, I've got a question. Undoubtedly you've heard this before, but what program do you use to make these comics?
  September 26, 2015
Also, There is a bit of a distracting typo. She says 'spa' rather then 'spar'
 I like it 
  September 26, 2015
YES! Came home to another amazing comic from Wertman! Amazing work!
 I made it 
  September 26, 2015
Quoting Andrew31kbrick193 /// No, thank you for posting this. It's great to see a new comic from you. I like the unease between Anut and Devastator. The fight scenes looked great to.
Thanks Andrew! Don't worry, Contenders is on its way soon too!
 I made it 
  September 26, 2015
Quoting Chains Productions Awesome job man! Your comics continue to have great action and dialogue. The redemption story arch of "Devastator" is quite cool. It nice to see the point of view of characters not really seen before. The plot was quite fast moving at points, for example, I feel like Anut's distrust of Kuvago could have been sustained longer, and the overall premise was simpler than your other stories, but under the restrictions, you preformed phenomenally. I appreciate you entering and I hope to see you again for round 2 (The winner will be decided upon by public vote) :D
Thanks, glad you liked Chains! Yeah, I definately am not so good with the one issue stories, especially for a story a bit more complicated than a single fight or something. I also think I might have dedicated too many panels to Slave Driver's monologue :P
 I like it 
  September 26, 2015
No, thank you for posting this. It's great to see a new comic from you. I like the unease between Anut and Devastator. The fight scenes looked great to.
 I made it 
  September 26, 2015
Quoting Windfall the Wanderer I loved every panel. Good job.
Thanks Windfall!
 I like it 
  September 26, 2015
Awesome job man! Your comics continue to have great action and dialogue. The redemption story arch of "Devastator" is quite cool. It nice to see the point of view of characters not really seen before. The plot was quite fast moving at points, for example, I feel like Anut's distrust of Kuvago could have been sustained longer, and the overall premise was simpler than your other stories, but under the restrictions, you preformed phenomenally. I appreciate you entering and I hope to see you again for round 2 (The winner will be decided upon by public vote) :D
 I made it 
  September 26, 2015
Quoting Toa Blizzard The Storyteller Brilliant work! I never expected someone as violently ruthless as 'Devastator' to actually feel remorseful. I look forward to your entry for round 2!
Thanks Blizzard! Well, some people can be suprising :) I hope that maybe you can enter round 2 as well! :D
 I like it 
  September 26, 2015
I loved every panel. Good job.
 I made it 
  September 26, 2015
Quoting Alex Christofferson Sweet! I like all the different characters!
Thanks Alex!
 
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