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LOM September UC-Revolutions Dampened(+Scorecard)
Thank you MOCPages for trying to stop me from posting this at least 5 times, but I finally got it out! I was proud of the rockwork, especially the passage.
About this creation

"Where are we even going?" My new companion, Lazarus, asked.
"To safety. The rest of the Nerougeians will be busy in the water, and if they are coming after us, the storm will hold them up." I replied. "I've got a guy who will set us up with some mounts and weapons, he'll be there."

*footsteps*

"Just trust me Laz, we'll be safe soon." I told him.
"We're in a stream. There's nowhere around us that's safe because we don't even know where we are!" Lazarus exclaimed.

"Haha, that's what you think." I chuckled as I dove into the water.

"Thalugar dohaeris." I whispered into the rock. The scrape of rock on rock chilled me to the core, but it was good that the passage still worked.
"What the..." Lazarus gasped.

I crawled out through the passage, looking for Al, who set us up with the equipment.

"Thano, who's a good wolfy! You are, oh yes you are!" I chuckled to Thano, my wolf.

"Al, you in there?" I called to a shed.

"Al, hello?" I asked.

The door slammed behind me.

"Come on Laz, that isn't cool. Open up." I groaned.
"That wasn't me! I swear!" Lazarus yelled.



"It's not opening, it's stuck!" Lazarus shouted.
"Keep trying!" I shouted back.


"Hahaha, salutations to you, Eros." a familiar voice chuckled.
"Oh, no." I moaned.

"Dog, seize him." Ajax commanded. Ajax was the man who captured me over a year ago.

"What are you doing here, Ajax?" I asked in contempt.
"Well, I paid your little friend a visit, and then I came to silence you. There are some people who want you, but I'd guess you knew that already." He said.

Lazarus yelled as he dove towards Ajax, but Ajax easily sidestepped him.

"Oh, how tragic. You think you can fight us!" Ajax laughed.

"Dog, get rid of him." Ajax commanded. "I have a sword to recover."
I heard flesh slapping flesh right next to me, but I was powerless.

"What the-Who are you?" I heard Ajax yell.

"I'm someone that you don't to mess with, so you're gonna leave these kids away or I'll destroy you." someone growled.
"You're going to de-HAHAHAHAHA. Oh you're funny, it's a shame I'll have to kill you." Ajax laughed.

From what I could see from the shed, it was the man who brought us here, and he was using a sort of magic to grab a weapon.

He threw a battleaxe towards my door, causing it to start breaking.

The man grabbed a knife and threw it to Lazarus.
Lazarus's attack failed, and Ajax disarmed him and threw him against the wall.

Lazarus managed to catch it just in time and got ready to attack.

While he did, the man started to emit white smoke from his body.

Lazarus's attack failed, and Ajax disarmed him and threw him against the wall.
"This'll make it more even, don't you think?" Ajax goaded.

I swung my battleaxe at Ajax, but he leaped away.

The man grabbed a sword from Al's body, but he had changed forms.

"Time to end this nonsense." the man grumbled.

I threw my battleaxe, hoping to skewer Ajax, but he pulled his head back at the last moment.

"Get out of here kid! Take your friend as well!" The man yelled.
I dove through the middle of them, making for the weapons.

I grabbed two weapons from the barrels, gold of course, and stored them with Thano.

I went back for a backup weapon, just in case. It couldn't hurt, right?

I dragged Lazarus to his horse, while he was half-dazed.

I got him mounted and gave him a sword.
"Don't drop this." I whispered.

"Let's go!" I yelled.

"You're finished, Ajax." the man shouted.

Me, Lazarus, Horse, Man

Backs, cause why not.

Man 2.0, Al, Dog, Ajax, Thano.

Backs again.

Set.

Shed.

Bird's Eye View.



Snow on the shed, meant to represent part of the storm.

Cows :D

Barrel and rockwork, which I was very proud of.

More rockwork and barrels.

Front of the shed.

Boat part.



Rockwork.

Barrel and rockwork.

My favourite bits.






Scorecard
LOM Character Intro = 5 points
LOM Freebuild-The Lead = 2 Points
LOM Freebuild-Escape! = 2 Points
LOM Enalica Rank Challenge-Fighter = 3 Points
LOM Freebuild-The Assassin = 2 points
LOM Freebuild-Preparing for Evacuation/Finding Information = 2 points
LOM October UC-Aftermath = 5 points
LOM Freebuild-Meeting an Old Friend = 2 points
LOM Freebuild-Hidden Friends = 2 points
LOM Freebuild-A Special Meeting(collab) = 2 points
Rank Challenge-Pathfinder-Forging Alliances = 3 points
LoM UC-Tensions Rising = 5 points
LoM Freebuild-The Short Trip = 2 points
LOM Freebuild-The Meeting = 2 points
LOM Freebuild-The Attempt = 2 points
LOM Freebuild-The Initiation = 2 points
LOM September UC-Revolutions Dampened(+Scorecard) = 5 points
LOM Freebuild-Tower Crashing = 2 points
Total = 50 points



Comments

 I like it 
  October 21, 2015
Cool build! I enjoyed the story. The action shot with the thrown axe is ace.
 I made it 
  September 29, 2015
Quoting Benaiah . You're alive! Great job!
I am! Thanks!
 I made it 
  September 29, 2015
Quoting Reese Hawthorne Pretty good work! The fight was a bit confusing dialogue-wise, though.
I was afraid of that, thanks though!
 I made it 
  September 29, 2015
Quoting Armon Russ More points for Enalica the Golden! :D Nice work here, Harry. I think the build could use some more detail, but the story is full of action. So glad you're back! ;P
Glad to be back, thanks for the feedback!
 I like it 
  September 29, 2015
More points for Enalica the Golden! :D Nice work here, Harry. I think the build could use some more detail, but the story is full of action. So glad you're back! ;P
 I like it 
  September 29, 2015
Pretty good work! The fight was a bit confusing dialogue-wise, though.
 I like it 
  September 29, 2015
You're alive! Great job!
 
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