MOCpages : Share your LEGO® creations
LEGO models my own creation MOCpages toys shop The Contenders #17: The Ego and the IdBionicle
Welcome to the world's greatest LEGO fan community!
Explore cool creations, share your own, and have lots of fun together.  ~  It's all free!
The Contenders #17: The Ego and the Id
Rate it  12345       Add a comment Add a comment   Zoom in  Zoom in
After almost half a lifetime of perpetual conflict, a terrible rivalry reached its climax at the death of Shadonax and the hand of Toa Raxonax! Despite this monumental victory, there is still a feeling of uneasiness in the air. Is this a signal of something worse on the horison?
About this creation




















































































































































































Characters in this Issue:

Raxonax
Krode
Idonax
Galia
Cilla
Korduu
Dorru
Montu
Clank
Galika
Hula


See
the
epilogue
here!


Stay tuned for the new version of Raxonax (and an update on the Contenders) coming later today.



Comments

 I made it 
  December 22, 2015
Quoting Earu ,the Wise One It's here! Finally!
Whooo!
 I made it 
  December 22, 2015
Quoting The Royal Brick Well, I'm very glad that you do post them here! I always enjoy reading them!
Thank you very much sir! :D
 I like it 
  December 21, 2015
It's here! Finally!
 I like it 
  December 21, 2015
Well, I'm very glad that you do post them here! I always enjoy reading them!
 I made it 
  December 21, 2015
Quoting The Royal Brick Excellent continuation of the story, Wertman! Do you publish these on platforms other than MOCPages?
Thanks! Yeah, I only publish these on MOCpages. It's the only site in which I've been able to cement a following
 I made it 
  December 21, 2015
Quoting Toa Gaim Interesting, but what is it with Hula and getting the bath ready for your self moc?
Business is slow for her. She's gotta grab every opportunity. :P
  December 20, 2015
Excellent continuation of the story, Wertman! Do you publish these on platforms other than MOCPages?
 I like it 
  December 20, 2015
Interesting, but what is it with Hula and getting the bath ready for your self moc?
 I made it 
  December 19, 2015
Quoting RaptorTalon ~ Awesome! but someone tell Rax to go get some real help.
For the sake of plot, I think I'll tell him to just take a bath :P
 I made it 
  December 19, 2015
Quoting Andrew31kbrick193 /// The Contenders hype is too real!
CHOO CHOO!
 I like it 
  December 19, 2015
Awesome! but someone tell Rax to go get some real help.
 I like it 
  December 19, 2015
The Contenders hype is too real!
 I made it 
  December 19, 2015
Quoting Chains Productions Oh man, just noticed the epilogue there now :P It sets up book 2 really well! Can't wait for it to be explained!
Heh, I'm personally looking forward to writing that particular character >:)
  December 19, 2015
Oh man, just noticed the epilogue there now :P It sets up book 2 really well! Can't wait for it to be explained!
 I made it 
  December 19, 2015
Quoting Chains Productions Oh man Raxonax hype! Seems he's gonna be quite a bit taller than the other toa (and really I don't have a problem with that) Anyway, I'll withhold my review until later. This issue was very good. It featured some really cool interactions with the different characters. I also liked that we saw Clank once again, as we haven't really seen him in a while. The explanation of the remakes of the MOCs worked quite well and helped it not feel jarring that they suddenly transformed. Initially the whole Rax having visions thing felt a bit underwhelming as it followed the exact thing that had just happened to him, but it seems it is following a different path, being more of an angel over his shoulder, so I'm excited to see more of him! The small fight scene helped even out the issue. Overall, it was a terrific issue and I'm very excited for issue 18 and Raxonax's next version!
Thanks Chains! Yeah, I was aware that the "mystical creature that psychologically torments Raxonax" thing might seem a little too repetative, but as you can clearly see, this will take somewhat of an alternative direction. Thanks again for the feedback!
 I like it 
  December 19, 2015
Oh man Raxonax hype! Seems he's gonna be quite a bit taller than the other toa (and really I don't have a problem with that) Anyway, I'll withhold my review until later. This issue was very good. It featured some really cool interactions with the different characters. I also liked that we saw Clank once again, as we haven't really seen him in a while. The explanation of the remakes of the MOCs worked quite well and helped it not feel jarring that they suddenly transformed. Initially the whole Rax having visions thing felt a bit underwhelming as it followed the exact thing that had just happened to him, but it seems it is following a different path, being more of an angel over his shoulder, so I'm excited to see more of him! The small fight scene helped even out the issue. Overall, it was a terrific issue and I'm very excited for issue 18 and Raxonax's next version!
 I made it 
  December 19, 2015
Quoting Windfall the Wanderer Wowsers. This... And that epilogue tho. I wonder what Raptor will think about it.
I'm wondering what Raptor will think about #18 when it comes. I think he'll be fairly excited about a certain character *spoilers*
 I like it 
  December 19, 2015
Wowsers. This... And that epilogue tho. I wonder what Raptor will think about it.
 I made it 
  December 19, 2015
Quoting Dark Aeon Very nice. Quite an interesting way to incorporate revamps as a plot point, if I do say so myself. Wonder how Idonax/Raxonax is going to play out.
Thanks Aeon! Yeah, It's probably a bit contrived, but I wanted some physical representation for the whole transformation thing. I hope you aren't dissappointed about where the Raxonax/Idonax thing ends up going!
 I like it 
  December 19, 2015
Very nice. Quite an interesting way to incorporate revamps as a plot point, if I do say so myself. Wonder how Idonax/Raxonax is going to play out.
 
By Wertman 8
Add to my favorite builders

10
people like this. See who.

1,582 visitors
20 comments
Added December 19, 2015
 


LEGO models my own creation MOCpages toys shop The Contenders #17: The Ego and the IdBionicle


You Your home page | LEGO creations | Favorite builders
Activity Activity | Comments | Creations
Explore Explore | Recent | Groups
MOCpages is an unofficial, fan-created website. LEGO® and the brick configuration are property of The LEGO Group, which does not sponsor, own, or endorse this site.
©2002-2019 Sean Kenney Design Inc | Privacy policy | Terms of use