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Hello people, especially the people of World of Emprovious, what I have today is yet another edition of my story, this time we follow Greg as he heads back to Londes. Enjoy. :-)
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World of Emprovious:
faction: Londes
name: Greg MacNeil
age: 25
weapon of choice: musket
Rank: adventurer/explorer


The ship is aglow as it cuts through the dark water while crew snores.
Me and Michael are conversing in the captain’s quarters, he speaks first.
“So, which faction are you planing on joining?” he asks.
“I’ll join whichever my sister is joining.” I respond. "Oh, and I've been meaning to ask you this since I came aboard, where is this going?"
"Why, Londes. Oh course." He says, the tone of his voice says he thinks I should remember that.
"I know we are going to Londes, but where in Londes are we going?"
"Ah, that makes more sense." he responds. “We are traveling to Erihaven." He points to a map of Londes displaying all of the major city and what faction they supported.

"Erihaven, that is were my sister lives." I say, remembering the last time I saw her.
"Oh, is that so?" he responds. " I guess your going to be joining the Parliamentarians.”
“I guess I am” I say.
We talk for a little while more, then I decide to try get some sleep.

(the next day)
Someone shakes me awake and I open my bleary eyes. He says something.
“What?” I mumble.
“We have made it to Londes.” He repeats.
I get up and collect my things, of which there are little, and head to the top deck.
I see Elizabeth by the bow, (the front of the ship) talking with Michael. I walk up to her and tap her shoulder. She seems somewhat alarmed as she turns around to see who it was.
“Oh, Greg, it was just you.” she says, her face relaxing.
“I didn’t mean to startle you.” I say apologetically.
“No, you didn’t startle me, you just… surprised me. she responds, looking for the right words.
We talk for a bit and then she says that she has go collect her things before we leave.
After we get off the ship I approach Michael to tell him that I am going to visit my sister.
“Oh course.” He says. “I would come with you put I have all this unpacking to do.”
I thank him and head off to my sister’s house, which is just a few blocks away.
As I reach her house I imagine what the reunion will be like, my sister opening the door , crying at the sight of me. Her daughter rushing up to see what all the noise was about. I kneel down to hug her, crying. A very nice family reunion indeed.
I finally reach the front door. I take a deep breath and knock.


To be continued…

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Comments

 I like it 
  March 13, 2016
This an very stunning story, with much potential! Supported by Very nice pictures! Very convincing Work!
 I made it 
  January 30, 2016
Quoting James Douglas Great job! May I guess the sister is not there? :D (spoiler alert) :P great job,love the sorry,though I think Liz is hiding something..... Anyhow,keep up the good work! (I've added a creation for woe today,to)
Thanks, James. Glad you like it. :-D
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  January 30, 2016
Quoting LegoPredator ! Nice story as always, great job Marley! I cannot wait to read next part, I think that Grag´s sister will be at home and he will find here Charles Logan :)
You may be right. ;) Also thanks for the comment.
 I like it 
  January 30, 2016
Nice story as always, great job Marley! I cannot wait to read next part, I think that Grag´s sister will be at home and he will find here Charles Logan :)
  January 30, 2016
Great job! May I guess the sister is not there? :D (spoiler alert) :P great job,love the sorry,though I think Liz is hiding something..... Anyhow,keep up the good work! (I've added a creation for woe today,to)
 
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