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Vraievel Havoc, the Hardballer
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The daughter of all Havoc of the world.
About this creation
Bellow is an extract of Vraeivel's debut in my upcoming novel-style fanfiction corssover of Bionicle and Fate/Stay Night; Unholy Grail War. The narrator, Archer, encounters the Vraievel the Hardballer.
Also, this will probably be my final MOCPages post as the Uploader has been updated, and as you can see by the *terrible* pictures, I don’t get along with it. Please keep up with my Flickr for updates on wherever I’ll be putting my MOCs and story.

Vraievel's theme: Play Hardball from the Majikoi S! OST.



I patrol this Night when I see an armoured figure in the park. Servants cannot be damaged by normal people, generally. Nor Masters without use of their magic. I’m an exception as a pseudo-Servant, having served my purpose and granted life through this shell of magical energy, I am vulnerable to normal attacks as well as Servants’. That means that whoever this armoured figure is, I’ll have to deal with carefully. I call into the night tersely.
“Excuse me—”
And then, it’s gone. The figure, which was cloaked in black and had piercing green eyes, skinny and tall with light armour, was gone.
“Hm,” I muse. The sound escaped my mouth. Suddenly, the hair rise on the back of my neck. I feel a premonition of a storm. “Who’s ther—”

I whirl around and dodge by the skin of my teeth a mighty punch. It’s not the figure I saw. I bound backward to get a better look at my opponent. It’s a woman. Her armour is white and orange. A lighter shade than my Servant’s, but it certainly resembles hers.
“Archer!” She addresses me in a loud voice. Despite her pose - her fists raised ready to shoot out or block an attack - she doesn’t lose femininity. She’s definitely taller than Spring. My brain focuses on the strangest of things. “I’ve come here for answers!”
“I’ve long-learned that one’s fists are a poor way of getting them from the sensible man.”
“I’ve long-heard you’re not exactly a sensible man,” she replies.
“… No-one alive knows me well enough to say that with any hint of certainty. Why are you so confident I’m not ‘sensible’, think of me you insane?”
“I do—for my father told me so.”

White and orange armour. Piercing blue eyes. A fist that glows an alien orange like a sallow sun. A father who knows that there was a time I wasn’t sane. If this is the child of Him, I’d better start answering her questions.
“It’s true. I was once fully insane, when I suffered a great loss. I’m also a hypocrite, because my heroic ideals are selfish: I have a hero complex due to shortcomings in my early life. I mended my own sanity in solitude. The One who went insane preceded Archer, and He has long been lost. Left in His wake is a terrifying mutant; I, Archer. Is that what you want?”
“Not quite,” She says. Her stance is excellent. She’s an interesting fighter. Self-taught… and not half bad either. I should be worried. “My father, you killed him.”
“I’ve killed a lot of men with families. Some were bandits and some were actually bad people. But with the exception of the fellow insane, I believe that no man turns evil for the sake of being evil.”
“Legends from the isle of my birth tell that every kill you wrack up brings you pain. If this is true; why did you kill my father?”
I lower my fists, slacken my stance and drop my guard entirely. The track my ego loops upon resumes seamlessly and my head is raised again high. I put a hand on my hip, and make a wry face like recalling a painful memory. I suppose I am.


“I killed Wreax Havoc because he killed the woman of my friend. Isn’t that who your father was? I didn’t want to outright slay him; so I put a curse on him that’d eventually kill him. When I found out he was an immortal being that controlled the tides of order and chaos, I realized he also decided those who knew the ‘truth’. About the big things; governments and propaganda. About the little things; who your wife was sleeping with and why your neighbour was annoyed at you this morning. I have my own ideals. I couldn’t allow that. The curse I put upon Wreax that made him fall terminally ill anchored him to our World. I’m sorry for your loss, but I can’t regret what I did. Hate me for it if you wish, I’ve said my piece.”
She - after a moment of consideration - sniffs before speaking. The Night is cold. “I’m Vraievel Havoc. Did my sister come to you? She had the same motivations as me.”
“I’ve had many a challenger. But not many women, I find them hard to deal with. If she had a name, I’d remember it—like I’ll remember yours.”
“That a fact,” she murmurs. I didn’t notice, but she reverted from her fighting stance to a normal one. The march of the beast has halted for the time being. “Her name is Ordra, Ordra Havoc.”
“… No, I know no girl by that name.”
“Tsk…” Vraievel Havoc clicks her tongue in annoyance. “Archer, I’ll let you go for now. I’ll be watching you every night during the Grail War. I’m a Master myself, but if you’re dead, my sister won’t be searching for you.”
“Keep me alive as bait?”
“Yes,” she answers plainly.
“You play hardball,” I reply with a smile. I don’t dislike this woman, this righteous answer seeker.
“I do,” she smiles back a little.



It’s a quick personality turnaround, but I can’t exactly complain. I don’t see any reason for her to fool me into think she wasn’t hostile. Though, we already have established that she plays hardball. My mental guard shouldn’t let up.
“Well, Vraievel,” I start, “I’m truly sorry for the trouble I’ve caused you. I promise you one thing, as forward and pragmatic and terrible as this will sound: I won’t harm you.”
“Archer—I just told you that I’m a Master of the Holy Grail War. I’m hardly your ally here. Don’t make a girl a promise you can’t keep.”
“For now, it seems to be in your best interest to keep me alive, doesn’t it?”
“Archer…” She wryly crinkles her brow and forms a displeased pout. I laugh a little as I walk off, back into the night. The sun will rise soon, so nothing can be done but return home and report this back to my frail Servant, ‘Spring’, the girl who doesn’t even know who she is. But… for now, I really should ask about that apparition I saw before she turned up.
“Oh, yes, Vraievel?”
“What is it?” she asks. She hasn’t moved.
“You… well, never mind.”
I give up before getting it out. I might still be a little schizophrenic, to be completely honest with myself. I healed my mind enough to look normal to others, but on my inside my thought processes are erratic, my ways of thinking are… numb and I’m not as focused as I used to be. I’m a bad fighter. And I shouldn’t bother a lady just because I’m stupid and crazy. I shake my head, angry with myself, and turn around again to continue walking away, when—
“Archer,” I hear.
“Hm?” I calmly spin back towards her.
“I’ve heard that saying something vague that seems meaningful is the first step in seducing a woman.”
“… I’m sure you’ve heard a lot of things,” I reply, slinking apathetically back into the night.



Comments

  March 29, 2016
ok, thats good to know.
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  March 28, 2016
Quoting Bluejay_hero MK. II so you're posting here still?!?!?
I plan to, provided MOCPages' uploader works, when I have something I wish to show. If I can upload images to this website, I absolutely will. But MOCPages is, frankly, a bad website. I like the people here, but the site's structure is totally terrible. So when, hopefully in the next few days or week, I have something knew I want to share on the internet, I will make every attempt to post here. If the image uploader fails me, I'll upload a full-length but image-less post detailing where else you can find my stuff. So, don't worry too much about my activity, I'm just busy with some other projects in real life :)
  March 27, 2016
so you're posting here still?!?!?
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  March 26, 2016
Quoting Bluejay_hero MK. II cmon! please start posting again!
What do you mean? I haven't quit making MOCs. But I'm pretty busy in real life right now. But I certainly appreciate your anticipation!:)
  March 26, 2016
cmon! please start posting again!
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  March 25, 2016
Quoting Tristan Ex Machina (insert fun text character emoji here)
(crying with laughter emoji goes yonder)
Sean /EMMSixteenA4
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Tristan Ex Machina
  March 22, 2016
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  February 11, 2016
:u
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  February 11, 2016
Quoting Commander Spencer Sean you already know how I feel about the autoplaying music
And do not care. Love you anyway, fam.
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  February 10, 2016
Sean you already know how I feel about the autoplaying music
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  February 10, 2016
Quoting Anaru LST Small pictures are small... :/
As stated above, the uploader and I aren't working, and I'm not going to be bothering to host external images on the pages unless I really lose it.
Quoting Dark Aeon, who said a lot
Thanks man, I'm ecstatic to know that people enjoy my writing. I highly recommend watching the Fate/ series, or read the visual novel. Otherwise, I'll try that tack with the uploader sometime, and may update this post's images. Thank you for that.
Quoting RaptorTalon ~ Looking nice! the chest seems a bit plain, and she could use a bit more blue, but she works pretty well. Not a huge fan of the tubes as hair but I will get over it. Great work Sean!
Thanks man. Sadly, there's not a lot of dark azure out there at the moment that I could get my hands on easily.
Sean /EMMSixteenA4
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Toa Blizzard The Storyteller
  February 9, 2016
Very impressive work on both the moc and the writing. The armor and colors flow quite well together, and the character seems incredibly interesting. Also, you've put lots of detail into your writing, yet not so much that it bores the reader. You ever publish a book, make sure to let me know!
  February 9, 2016
Small pictures are small... :/
  February 9, 2016
Also, you should be able to select the "large" option at the bottom of the simple uploader to make the photos bigger. If of course you ever post here again.
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  February 9, 2016
Looking nice! the chest seems a bit plain, and she could use a bit more blue, but she works pretty well. Not a huge fan of the tubes as hair but I will get over it. Great work Sean!
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  February 9, 2016
Interesting concept. She could use some more blue (azure?) with some distribution along the torso. Personally, I don't like the white/orange color scheme, but other than that the design makes up for it. Can't say I know anything about Fate/Stay Night other than the early plot synopsis I pulled up a minute ago on Wikipedia, but what you've written certainly seems interesting. I'll keep an eye out for more of this from you.
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  February 9, 2016
Quoting MuppZ . Neat MOC but some blue on the torso would be nice. Also, a bionicle abd fate/stay night crossover? What is this madness!?!
I'm confident in what I can do, although I imagine that there will only be one or two known Bionicle characters as Servants. I noticed you before, you commented on Dragoneye's 'Archer', right? Said it didn't look like Archer? You might want to check the MOC I made before Vraievel here. You might have been talking about the wrong 'Archer'.
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  February 9, 2016
Neat MOC but some blue on the torso would be nice. Also, a bionicle abd fate/stay night crossover? What is this madness!?!
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  February 9, 2016
Quoting Beardless Dwarf (Evan) If ignörance is bliss, let them be happy, hmmm? ;)
Ironic, coming from the guy who doesn't make MOCs. We'll speak of this once you make an appearance concurrent with my own.
Quoting Toa Blizzard The Storyteller Very impressive work on both the moc and the writing. The armor and colors flow quite well together, and the character seems incredibly interesting. Also, you've put lots of detail into your writing, yet not so much that it bores the reader. You ever publish a book, make sure to let me know!
Thank you kindly! I am working on a sci-fi book currently, indeed. Although it's in a rough draft at the moment, should I (gods-willing) finish it, I'll certainly be making a big deal of it! :P
  February 9, 2016
Quoting Sean How do you anticipate I got these images to exist? The simple uploader gets these results.
If ignörance is bliss, let them be happy, hmmm? ;)
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  February 9, 2016
Quoting Beardless Dwarf (Evan) Bro, do you even simple uploader?
How do you anticipate I got these images to exist? The simple uploader gets these results.
  February 9, 2016
Bro, do you even simple uploader?
 
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