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ROAE Chapter 1 - The Hopeless Padawan (FB)
Top of the mornin' to all of you ladies and gents', and welcome to the first story and tale of Jizsa Vylon! This is actually my first free build of anything that I ever done in a group, as well as a random build in years. So please bare with me for I have a lack of experience with these. But on top of that, let's get this started! I hope you all enjoy! :)
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(Unknown, 16 BBY, Onboard an Imperial Light Cruiser)

Jisza- "I still couldn't believe it. I just couldn't take it all in yet. My own master...the man who took me under his wing...who gave me a home and a purpose...who gave me everything I needed to survive...who was like my own father, just suddenly vanished.'

'All I knew about his last whereabouts was when he and the others left almost a week ago to find a new base. I figured that Siruhna would be vulnerable now, and the Empire could possibly track us all here in a matter of weeks. If I had known, though, that the last mission was gonna do something to Master Kydan, I would have went against it without a second thought.'

'But I can't. I ain't no time traveler who can go back and change it all. I'm just a useless, weak and pathetic padawan who can't even hold himself in a fight yet. Sure, Kydan and the others helped me train constantly, but I never said that it was all successful.'

'And on top of that, we just got report on the master's friends, learning that a few of them had disappeared too. Why is this all happening? Why is everyone I know and care for are suddenly being taken? For what reason?'

'...I don't know...I don't really know what to do. I can't fight a war. Not when I'm not strong enough. And not to mention that I have no experience whatsoever. Without them...and Master Kydan...I'm too weak...'

' I'm not. Master Kydan wouldn't allow me to say such things. He would always tell me...'

(Voice is heard through his memories)

Kydan- "If you start speaking like have already lost. Never give up, and never let your fears take hold of you. You must always grasp onto the hope that you carry inside you, even the smallest amount left. For when there is hope, there shall always be a spark to light up your way. With that, you shall be more powerful than anyone could possibly imagine. When the day comes to where I shall be no more, you must always carry on and pass on the hope you had gained. From there, the Forge shall light your way."

Jisza- 'He's right. I can't let myself feel so down. I have to stay strong, even if they are gone. I have to carry on...for my friends...for my master...and for myself.'

'And I'll do my best to keep on the hope I have. I'll bring hope to those whoever I meet, and teach them too what you have all taught. I'll help fight this war...for the freedom of the galaxy.'

'I'll become the new spark...the "Young Spark" of the future Rebellion. And I will help lead them all to a better future.'

'It would what they would have's what Master Kydan would have wanted to do. And I promise...I won't let you down...all of you..."

Looking down at his lightsaber, Jisza takes a deep breath to calm himself. He felt ready. He already felt stronger. And he was truly ready to face the future events that shall be revealed to him and the galaxy. All he needed...was a bit of patience.

???- (Comm) Spark? You copy?

Jizsa- *Whispers* Young Spark here.

???- (Comm) We're all in position for infiltration. How's your end?

Jisza- Ready to move on targets. Standing by for orders.

???- (Comm) Copy, commander. You are cleared to proceed. Repeat; you are cleared to proceed.

With his eyes and mind determined, he loads his pistol and then activates his saber, gaining the attention of one of the two Scout Troopers around the corner. This was gonna be the day that he would start to prove everyone.

Jisza- Understood Tanga Leader. Young Spark out.

BONUS PIC TIME! Just thought I might as well try and throw in some leftover pics after each chapter for now on. least when I will remember them anyway haha XP

Yeah, I know this was a very short chapter, and probably not my very best, but I'm a little hesitant on revealing too much of him and the other characters so soon. I'm gonna try to take things a bit slower from here, and hopefully I can get the next season(s) up to these major points. Note this; there's a lot more going on than what you see or hear. Way more than you realize... 0_0

But anyways! Thought I might as well post a new, and yet small random comic build for ya' guys. Since a lot of people liked the intro of Padawan Jizsa Vylon from last year, I decided to give you guys a bit of insight with him. Hopefully you all enjoyed :)

As for the story of Jisza Vylon, his story will probably be skipping around the years after Order 66 and before A New Hope. I will soon post links when it starts to get bigger and bigger later on.

Also, if any of you are interested in joining this fine Star Wars RPG, then go on over to Rise of an Empire (RPG) and check it out for yourselves.

Well that about wraps things up, so I think I shall take my leave. Also, for those of you wondering what's going on with the next chapter of "The Jedi Mercenary", it will be coming very, I promise. Just need a bit of time to deal with my personal life. So thank you all for your time reading this short chapter of mine, and please leave a comment below of what you think and possible on what I can approve on, and perhaps a slap on the like button could help too? Again, thank you all and, as always, I hope you all have a splendid and fan-tucking-tastic day/night! See ya' in the next one;)

- Director K.W.


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  February 21, 2016
Sweet! I love the set, and I dig how the voice-over goes on top of the action sequence. Nicely ties to your other stories as well. Nicely done!
  February 19, 2016
By the way, Happy birthday!! I know it's kind of late but hopefully it comes by as good either way ;)
 I like it 
  February 18, 2016
Cool! I can't wait to see more from this character.
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  February 18, 2016
Wow! Amazingly well done! ;) I really like the story you have going, great job Director!
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