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So, today was my birthday. Here goes.

Happy birthday to me.
Happy birthday to me.
Happy birthday to me-ee.
Happy birthday to me.

There's supposed to be some stuff here pertaining to my storyline and writing that's pretty important, but I'm too tired to type it up right now. Expect it sometime tomorrow.

Alright, news, and several days late. Let's get this over with.

I'm cancelling Neo Ordina.

Alright, now that you've probably recovered from shock and/or rage, let me explain why: I've lost the will to continue it. The problem with me writing stories is this: I think of the start, then jump to random ending bits while neglecting the journey itself. So while I know perfectly how I want Neo Ordina to end, I have no idea of how to write my way to there. If I were to force myself to continue writing, it just would be true to how I would want it to go, not to mention that it would likely end up many times longer than it was ever supposed to be.

So I'm going to change it up a bit. A slightly simpler plot, fewer major characters (at least, early on), and an entirely new setting. Gone is Aeos, and with it, my now former self MOC Dark Aeon. It will be a shame to see him go.

See that guy in the main photo? Brief spoiler of one of the main characters of said new plot. I've slowly been building them for the past couple months, tweaking them and the storyline into what will hopefully be less of a mess than Neo Ordina. Not giving away any names yet.

I have considered at least writting the final chapter(s) of Neo Ordina to at least give you guys (and myself) some sense of closure. Expect that within the month, knowing my activity. And the first of the new characters sometime after that.

Anyways, till next time,

Dark Aeon Gonna have to come up with a new name now, don't I?



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Dark Aeon
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Blizzard The Storyteller
  April 11, 2016
Interesting. While I think it's a bit unfortunate that Neo Ordina is to be cancelled, I'm equally intrigued by this newer storyline you've concocted, one where new characters are to be introduced while erasing the old ones. Best of luck with your new story line!
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  April 11, 2016
Ah well, RIP DA.
 I made it 
  April 11, 2016
Quoting Blizzard The Storyteller Interesting. While I think it's a bit unfortunate that Neo Ordina is to be cancelled, I'm equally intrigued by this newer storyline you've concocted, one where new characters are to be introduced while erasing the old ones. Best of luck with your new story line!
Thanks. I've felt that part of the problem with the past three storylines is that I kept reusing characters from the first storyline, and wound up relapsing to their old personalities whenever I tried to change something. Best way to fix that is to start with a new, clean slate. Don't mourn Neo acording just yet though, there's still going to be one final chapter to wrap everything up.
  April 11, 2016
Ah, a new storyline? I might just follow that one: I'd wanted to check out Neo Ordina, but it was just a little too far in for me to really get into it. Look forward to this new story though.
 I made it 
  April 9, 2016
Welp, news is now up. Read it and weep.
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  April 9, 2016
Happeh birthdayzez
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  April 8, 2016
Happy Birthday! Im a bit late due some 7-hours time difference :-)
Dark Aeon
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Psithur .
  April 7, 2016
Happy birthday, good sir. Also, my birthday is in less than a week, so das cool. And raptor stole my joke just so you know. Gosh, rap!
Dark Aeon
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Blizzard The Storyteller
  April 7, 2016
Happy late Birthday!
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  April 7, 2016
Hopapeh Burphdaiz te yu :3
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  April 7, 2016
HEPPY BARFDAY TA EWE
  April 6, 2016
Today you're older than you've ever been before.
  April 6, 2016
Whhooo! happy birthday man! you are one year closer to dying! (Sorry)
 
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