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GoW World Building Challenge 2016: Poem
Hello! This is my poem for the World Building Challenge over at the awesome Guild of Writers(link in description)! We all had to write a short story for the contest and I chose to write a poem. I am choosing to post this separately from my world because the other one was so long. Anyway, please remember to rate, comment, and enjoy! :D
About this creation

Death and despair covers the land.
Brought forth by Aldus’ hand.

Desperate cries pierce the sky.
Screamed out as many die.

The crumbled walls fall and burn,
as the swarms of shadows writhe and churn.

The endless sieges ware on.
The peacefulness far gone.

Lives lost and souls took.
After the battles, loved ones look.

When they find those who are dead,
they place them in their eternal bed...

Well, there's my poem, hope you enjoyed it! :)
Anyway, here's the build:

I would have built something more significant to the world but when I was building it I had a different story in mind and this model would have worked with that story. Oh well!

So that was part two of my GoW World Building Challenge entry, hope you enjoyed it. :)
Link to group: Link

-Marley Mac-


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  January 12, 2017
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  January 10, 2017
Excellent work Marley! Great poem, and some great building! Again, good luck to you!
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  January 10, 2017
Hey hey! That is a nice poem! I can hear it in my head as a poem! That means you did good! :D BTW, great builds too! Keep it up m8!
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  January 10, 2017
Hey, that poems pretty good! Great work on the contest!
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