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Intercepted | SWRP Dynar Squad Intro
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“I have something!” shouted Sargeant Tix from the computer station in the center of the room. “Sepratist transmission, unencrypted, coming from Fusai.”

“That’s odd,” I replied. “Roll the message.” It was indeed a droid, telling his ship to send two droid squads and saying that he was to be considered captured.

Junkin, another clone in my squad, gave his input. “Somethin’ strange is goin’ on there. I don’t know what in the galaxy he’s talkin’ about, but I have a bad feelin’ about it.”

The clones stationed at this base made up a part of the 16th Battalion of Home Defense. Of course that name was quite aboslete with us being removed from defending Kamino months ago. Dynar squad, made up of Jace, Cinder, Junkin, Tix, and me, Captain Shard, along with four other rookies, now resided in a listening outpost and base on Obroa-skai.

So now three options lay before us. Inform the General that we had intercepted a strange transmission, though getting clones from the current residence of the main fleet would take too long. We could also just ignore it. It might be some malfunctioning droid that has nothing to do with Republic interests. Looking at my squad though, I knew they were already decided on the last option.

“Sargeant, inform the rookies that we’re leaving.” He nodded and opened the comm channel. Then I turned to my surrounding squad. “Dyner squad, suit up. We’re going to get to the bottom of this.”

[THE END]


Well, I'm a bit out of practice with SWRPing. I've actually been writing a fantasy book, so I haven't completely stopped writing, but that world is quite different from this one. I hope you enjoyed this character intro. By the way characters are from left to right:
Jace, Cinder, Shard, Junkin, Tix
And that's all!

-Wolf



Comments

  November 14, 2019
Just need to proofread one more time and then my segment will be up :D
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  November 12, 2019
Good intro. It sounds like something I would write if I could format dialogue properly xD
  November 12, 2019
For the record, there was a squad on Kashyyyk that had Phase 1 armor in 19 BBY: Trident Squad. Captian Rex used hybrid armor in the late years of the war, and the clones in the Battle of Viidaav had Phase 1 armor even though it, too, was relatively late--well after Grievous's full entrance into the war, at least, so after Hypori.
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  November 12, 2019
Quoting Wolf Pack Well, I happen to have three excuses for that. :P 1. I couldn't find anything about the date of this. 2. I have no phase II armor. 3. I like phase I better.
It's vague at best but not hard to find, here's a link: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Phase_II_clone_trooper_armor/Legends And yes it is legends but it doesn't conflict with canon.;) That'll do it for sure.xD And that's fine my dude.;)
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  November 12, 2019
Quoting Winslow "Whit" Wadsworth Whittier The Wise™ I love how this is playing out! Great squad, very cool. Only critique is that this takes place in 20 BBY and the switch to phase II armor started in 21 BBY, just a year before.:p Nothing big or important just a literally unimportant detail.;) Keep up the great work!
Well, I happen to have three excuses for that. :P 1. I couldn't find anything about the date of this. 2. I have no phase II armor. 3. I like phase I better.
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  November 12, 2019
I love how this is playing out! Great squad, very cool. Only critique is that this takes place in 20 BBY and the switch to phase II armor started in 21 BBY, just a year before.:p Nothing big or important just a literally unimportant detail.;) Keep up the great work!
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  November 12, 2019
Quoting Black_Wind 8319 Ooooo I like this batch of shinnies! Well then, we'll have to see how you fare against the might of the CIS!
Thanks! I sure hope they do well, but we will see.
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  November 11, 2019
Ooooo I like this batch of shinnies! Well then, we'll have to see how you fare against the might of the CIS!
  November 11, 2019
Can't wait! I made a slight error but it's an easy fix: Obroa-skai is actually not near as close to Fusai as I thought, BUT they are VERY "nearby" in terms of their affiliation, since Fusai was recently a branch of the Obroa-skai library, so it is very conceivable that Obroa-skai would serve as a relay point of some sort for Fusai communications.
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  November 11, 2019
Quoting Green Xoni An epic and flawless RP! Love the different characters. A worthy set of adversaries for sure--I'm getting really excited.
Thank you! I'm happy you liked it. I'm going to get the next one out as soon as I can.
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  November 11, 2019
An epic and flawless RP! Love the different characters. A worthy set of adversaries for sure--I'm getting really excited.
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  November 11, 2019
Neat. I like the minifig designs. I seriously need to met my intro out, but it's a bit longer than I was expecting :/
 
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