Introducing my main character, Zodon the bounty hunter.
About this creation
This is the intro to my comic, the chronicles of Zodon. Zodon is a Mando bounty hunter, though he hides his Mando amour under another suit. All his stories are retold by an authour who met Zodon one night, and Zodon agreed to let him publish his grim adventures as stories.
He stuck out his arm, and squeezed off 2 shots, which blasted away the leg of the fleeing bandit.
The bandit fell, blood flowing from his wound.
Zodon stalked towards him, like a panther about to make the final strike. He walked past the vomiting merc, steping over the stream of sick.
Zodon: Tell me what i want.
Bandit: Go to he- CHOW
I listened, half horrified, half intrigued, as he told me with something that could only be pride, how he stuck the bandits head in the waste flowing from Gobba the Hutt's palace.
Realising his prey was dead, he stalked away.
He opens his visor.
Next morning, a tramp finds the body, and runs away, terrified of the damge inflicted on it.
The puke is a tad strange and the environment lacks detail. Zodon looks alright but the other figures and the dialogue is a bit weak. You might add, after the bandit gets shot again, Zodon saying 'Nobody swears at me' or something humerous of that nature.
very cool, do you think i could be in the comic?? heres my guy:
he was an underground naboo officer during the invasion by the trade federation. years after that, he was trained by the mandos during a reconiccense mission. he is a republic spy undercover.