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MocOlympics round 1 Patrick Gregory vs Dave Shaddix
Category: Short Story, The story of a burger bar.
About this creation
Here is my entry for MocOlympics round 1, my competitor is Dave Shaddix He will be posting his creation shortley, I wish him good luck as well as all other competitors. The title of this is "The story of a burger bar", this is because I don't wan to give too much away.















































































Well there you go, I still don't get the moral my self but I guess the Welsh do.

If any judges would like a bribe, I have a special present for them. Wink Wink.

This took a few days to build but the real hard part is the story.



Comments

 I like it 
  September 19, 2008
Ok, I got a chance to check it out from my home computer this morning. That was funny. I think it was great that both of you did fast food mocs with an animal twist. Congrats on the win and welcome to round two. ~ Chris.
 I like it 
  September 17, 2008
Congrats at the win! Well, if I win mine, than it means I go up against you. Good luck, man, and good job with this one.
Patrick Gregory
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Dave Sterling
  September 16, 2008
I love zombie sheep. Especially when they eat people and there's lots of trans-red 1x1 plate blood. Awesome work here. I almost fell out of my chair laughing and the guy in the next office over probably thinks I'm nuts now.
 I like it 
  September 16, 2008
Hilarious, very original and well done !
 I like it 
  September 16, 2008
This is one of the most original things I've seen on MOCpages in quite some time, excellent job. The stilted dialogue somehow just adds to the charm.
 I like it 
  September 16, 2008
Well, I guess I am the deciding vote. And I give it to....you. As close as it was, I think you edged him out overall. Welcome to round 2!
 I like it 
  September 16, 2008
Sorry, but I think Shadix gets this one, but I am not a judge, so... You did good, though. I just think the commentary was a bit dry. Maby a few America jokes, some cracks at Burger King, stuff like that would help. But, then again, this is probably better than what I would have done so who am I to criticize? Good job, man.
Patrick Gregory
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Dave Shaddix
  September 15, 2008
We are ONE vote away from a decision. I LOVE your story and your build. As soon as I saw it, I knew I was in for a fight. I think it is awesome that we both made fast food MOCs. Again man, GREAT work here. The big 'POP' shot cracked me up. Again, good luck! -dave
 I like it 
  September 15, 2008
Zombie sheep right out of left field. I didn't expect that. Pretty silly. Thanks for the laugh. garth
 I like it 
  September 15, 2008
HIL-ARI-US. extremely good. this was awesome all the way
 I like it 
  September 15, 2008
Glad to see Brian gave this one his nod. I went with Shaddix, but this story is not only hilarious, but really unique, and definitely deserves to win if the final vote goes your way! While both stories were ludicrously entertaining, and in my book about even in that regard, I felt Dave's was a superior build due to it's complexity and visual impact. Still a great job...glad I wasn't against either of you guys in this category. Both were smokin' good entries!
 I like it 
  September 15, 2008
Hahahaha! Hilarious! 5/5 for sure! ~ James : P
 I like it 
  September 15, 2008
Exploding miniland figs and zombie sheep? Yeah, that’s a win in my book…you’ve got my vote. Love the giant burger, BTW.
 I like it 
  September 15, 2008
Great Story!!! and mice job of useing the legoland style minifig. Great MOC.
 I like it 
  September 15, 2008
Nice job! It's not often that I see Miniland MOCs. ~Nick ("ElNickre")
 I like it 
  September 15, 2008
The story is really good! I love how you made that guy getting fatter!
 I like it 
  September 15, 2008
Dude that sick. *POP* =) I love that big burger...
 
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