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After a attack on Grevious' fleet. Grevious cowardly runs and hides at the near by planet Mygeeto. Desprate to catch him the 282nd legion under command of there new Jedi general, Ki-Paul, pursues the droid general.
Commander J's gun ship "the Hornet" lands on Mygeeto.
The doors open and the clones led by Ki-Paul come running out.
Suddenly something hits the wing.
Commander J: What was that?
Ki-Paul: I don't know, but we won't be going anywhere without it being repaired.
Commander J: Get to work on repairing the ship, we will cover you.
Pilots: Yes sir.
The pilots get to work on repairing the wing.
A droid tank comes from the bridge to reinforce the droids.
A shot of the droids side.
The clones send out a walker.
Commander J shoots down a droid.
A STAP shoot a clone.
The walker shoots a destroyer.
Commander J: Looks up there, it's Grevious! We won't be able to reach him.
Ki-Paul: Then we will have to bring him down to us. Split up and sestroy the support beams.
Commander J: Yes sir.
The men split up
Commander J: We have to take destory that turret to get to the support beams.
Commander J takes out a gernade.
And destroys the turret.
Commander J and Skillet set the charges.
The other clones set the charges too.
The clones run back to stay clear of the explosion.
Grevious: Ha! They are retreating! Kill them!
The platform callapses.
The clones run over to search for Grevious
Trooper: I found something.
Ki-Paul: Good work! It looks like it lead to the sewers.
Ki-Paul: Me and Commander J will go down. Stay here and make sure no more droids come.
The climb down into the swers.
Commander J: What is that smell?
Ki-Paul: Were in a sewer! What do you think!
Ki-Paul: Look over there, it's a bomb!
Commander J: This thing can blow up half the city!
Ki-Paul: Can you dissable it?
Commander J: Mabye, Wait. It has a timer on it. 20 seconds left! We need to get out of here!
They hurry back out of the sewer.
Pilot: We fixed the wing but it won't get far with out the parts we need.
Commander J: Good enough! This whole place is about to explode!
They get into the ship and fly off.
They look back and see the explosians behind them.