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The Protodite King Revolt, Chapter 1: Recruitment
A story about a small group of Toa (and a Makuta) who go on a mission.
About this creation
(IMPORTANT NOTE: As you might have guess from the date this was posted, this story has been canceled. It doesn't match my current storyline anymore. If you want to read any of my stories that actually go anywhere, read The Nidahk Chronicles or The Great Experiment instead.)

Recently, Makohrii (a member of the Order of Mata Nui) was given a mission to find, and destroy, a very dangerous creature. However, he realizes that he can’t do this alone, so he is trying to find some people who want to help him with this dangerous task.

He finds Makuta Skorvahk, who is training his skills by battling some of his minions, named Gardax.

Makohrii: “Hey Skorvahk!”
Skorvahk: “What?”
Makohrii: “I just got a mission. Wanna help?”
Skorvahk: “No.”
Makohrii: “Fine... Then I’ll just beat them all up by myself...”
Skorvahk: “...Beat up? Hey, wait!”

Later, they find Demahk.

Makohrii: “Hey Demahk! What are you doing?”
Demahk: “I’ve almost found a way to make Makuta good instead of evil!”
Makohrii: “Really?!”
Demahk: “No! I’m bored...”
Skorvahk: “Wannna help us beat up some bad guys?”

Demahk: “Yes. That’d be fun.”
Makohrii: “Good. Do you know anyone else who might want to help?”
???: “Mind if I join in?”

Demahk: “You! I’ll... I’ll...”
???: “Dude, take it easy. It was an accident, a misunderstanding!”
Demahk: (grumbles)
Skorvahk: “What brings you here, Vezowa?”
Vezowa: “Well, I kinda heard you talking to Skorvahk about a mission. Can I come?”
Skorvahk: “Good. Another Toa we can use as a shield.”

Vezowa puts his weapon against Skorvahk’s throat.

Vezowa: “What did you just say?”
Skorvahk: “I said that another Toa would increase our victory chances greatly!”
Vezowa: “Heh... Thats just what I thought.”
???: “Hey, you guys!”
Demahk: “Who are you...?”

???: “Dongohr. Toa Dongohr.”
Makohrii: “Well, uhm... Dongohr. Do you want to go on a mission with us?”
Dongohr: “Sure! What’s it about?”
Makohrii: “Allright, everyone. Listen up. Have you ever heard of Protodites?”
Skorvahk: “You mean those microscopic Rahi?”
Makohrii: “Yes, those. As you may know, some of them were enlarged by the Ignika, Mask of Life. These enlarged Protodites were then named Protodax.”
Vezowa: “The Ignika enlarged them to make them guardians, right?”
Makohrii: “Yes. But these were not the only creatures that were enlarged by the Ignika.”
Dongohr: “You mean Gadunka? I thought he returned to his normal size.”
Makohrii: “He did, but I wasn’t referring to him. Have you heard... of the Protodite King?”
Demahk: “What’s that? A Protodite that grew larger than the other enlarged ones?”
Makohrii: “Well, not exactly. The Protodite King is a slightly larger Protodite with three heads in stead of two. He has the power to control other Protodites, and is very intelligent.”
Demahk: “So?”
Makohrii: “Our mission is to find and defeat him.”
Demahk: “Wow... big deal.”
Makohrii: “This won’t be easy, Demahk. He is intelligent, powerful, and probably well-organised.”
Vezowa: “But... We can do it, right?”
Makohrii: “Let’s go for it. Together, we can take him down!”

High above them, on a ledge, is a mysterious being.

???: “Not if I have anything to say about it...”

The being teleports away...

To be continued...


 I like it 
  February 11, 2009
ya you should join and gringat have you read his other stories. They are good too.
 I like it 
  February 11, 2009
A good yarn. Have you considered joining the Bionicle Bard Hall? It's a group dedicated to Bonicle story writers such as yourself, and Chuck's in here with me =]
Skorp The Slothful
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Duncan Life
  February 8, 2009
wow now i want to make a visual epic
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