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Eothain : Episode One . The first issue of my fantasies series Eothain. Enjoy and tell me what you think. . One thousand years ago the first explorers settled in Eothain and created there own countries. Falcadon, Persta, Romata, and Sandwrath. When the settlers got to Eothain it was only populated by elves, goblins, and orcs. the Elves had three countries Eldthrain, Gatwood, and Rivreld. As the countries grew so did the hatred of two countries Persta and Falcadon. The other countries eventually picked sides with one of the two. In a major conflict between the countries the leaders made various enchanted weapons to help them win. The Dager of shadow for Persta, the Bow of Poison for Eldthrian, the helmet of invincibility for Romata, and the Neckalace of Light for Falcadon. After, all of the items we're destroyed accept for the Dager, for the Dager was stolen by a sect who thought that the Dager was sacred. They hid it in a temple somewhere in Falcadon and passed out of all knowledge. Nine hundred years later we join an elf named Arathorn as he's about to have the adventure of his life. Arathorn: Uncle I'm going to the market and the pub. Uncle: Sure just be back at dark. (Later at the market) Arathorn: Hey Sam. Sam: Hey Arathorn: Can I buy that quiver there? Sam: Sure. Arathorn: Here. Sam: Thanks for buying. Arathorn: I'm going to the pub you want to come? Sam: No thanks I've got to run the shop. (After in the pub) Arathorn: Can I get an ale. Bar Tender: Sure that'll be one coin. (Later) Arathorn: Damn I've got to go it's getting dark. (Arathorn then walks home) Arathorn: Why is my door knocked down? Oh @#$%, unlce, no! Arathorn: No! Nazrak: Ssshhhaaaa! (Nazrak then pins Arathorn to the stone fence and Arathorn the reaches for thr sicle on the fence) (And stabs the Nazrak in the face) *Shlink* Nazrak: Ahh! Arahtorn: *pant* *pant*. Nazrak 2: Ssshhhaaaa! (A ranger appears and he stabs the Nazrak) *shlink* Nazrak 2: *Hurk* Eric: We have to go before more come. Arathorn: Who the hell are you. Eric: I'm Eric a ranger. Arathorn: What where those things? Eric: The Nazrak, the shadow assassins of Persta. *sshhaa* Eric: @#$% they're close, grab your bow and lets go unless you want to deal with more of those. *sshhaa* Eric: Follow me! Run! Into the forest! (Later in the forest) Eric: *pant* Ok they're no longer following us.*pant* Arathorn: Whats happening I can hear screams coming from the village?! Eric: We're being invaded by Persta. To be continued... Please Rate And Comment.

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