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ASR: Chapter 2 . The next installment in my story, A Story Retold! . Missed the other chapters? Prologue: Here! Chapter 1: Here! I'm starting a contest, the SelfMoc-Off Tournament! Check it out, it's not starting for a while though, but you can join the group! Now, for the story. You might want to check out chapter 1 again, it picks up right where chapter 1 left off. Destrin: Eat sword, toa! Vanu: Owww!!!! Vex: Nooo!! Vanu! UhhhhhhÖ Prepare to die, stupid toa. You have been bested. Tempus: Crap. Vex: Aaaaaaaah! You monster!!! DIEEEEEE!!!!! *blam blam blam blam* Ah! Why you little... *KA-Pow!* Tempus: Rule one, never turn your back on an angry toa. Urk! *Bam!* Uuuuuh! (breath knocked out) Vex: Is he dead? No. Gah! Vanu: Uuuuuh.... I put a cloth on the place where he cut my arm... I say we cut his throat now. Tempus: Now donít make hasty decisions based off your rage, young one. Letís first find out why he attacked us. Heís not some stupid beast, the makuta attack for reasons. You know Iím right here. Iíll never tell! Great. Nice going, Temp. I knew he was there. And donít EVER call me ĎTempí again. I still have some power over time, remember? I can invoke a memory so strong that heíll say it aloud. No I wonít! I hear what youíre trying to do, Iíll... Shhhhhhhhh .... .... .... .... .... Aaah! I was sent by Master Teridax to destroy you! You cannot interfere with his plan! Vex: Whoa! Thatís cool! NOoo! Master will not be pleased! Shame! *boop!* What was that? Haha! See you later, stupids! *poof!* All: Heís gone! Crud. Now what? Any idea where to go from here? Our only lead is Teridax, and we donít know where he is. How about we find the other two original toa! Maybe one of them will know what to do! Good idea, but still, where to go now? Iím unfamiliar with todayís world. Vex? Hrmmmm... I know! Letís go to Po-Ere! Why didnít I think of that! Why? Whatís there? ???: You have failed us, Destrin. Time to send someone a bit more... competent. ???: Heh Heh Heh... Fourth Character Commentary: This scene was a lot more fun to shoot, and a lot more painful to edit the photos. I wish I could have a longer fight scene, but I time was an issue. I especially like the backflip shot, sorry I forgot to edit that pic. That's the fourth time I've used a little rig to hold up a character; first when Tempus was in stasis (prologue), second when Destrin was swooping (ch 1), and a third when Destrin hit the wall (this chapter). I hope everyone's liking the story so far, I'm having fun making it for sure! Thanks for viewing! Don't forget to rate and comment!

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