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A Deadly Response 03: Jealousy . . Korriban, two weeks after the events in The Legend of Harash Soru 9. Umdar Quan: "Master Dovallia are you sure we should do this?" Ben Dovallia: "Of course Umdar! Master Soru came here and defeated all four Sith alone, I'm sure the three of us can handle it." Umdar Quan: "Master Soru is a lot more powerful than any of us though..." Ben spun around and glared at Umdar. Ben Dovallia: "Master Soru is a Jedi! We are Jedi! There is no difference." Darl Shogar: "But..." Ben Dovallia: "Enough! We are just as powerful as Master Soru!" A deep chuckle sounded behind them. Darth Zealot: "Oh how wrong you are." The three Jedi spun around and activated their lightsabers. Ben Dovallia: "Zealot! This ends today!" Zealot: "We shall see." Zealot launched into the air, landing on a rock and clashing his saber against both Ben and Darl. The Sith flipped forward again and punched the ground, launching all three Jedi into the air. Before any of them could react, Zealot spun around and used the Force to slam Master Dovallia into the cliff. Ben struggled to his feet but then collapsed as the blow rendered him unconscious. Zealot faced the two Jedi. Darth Zealot: "Just you and me Padawans..." The two young Jedi charged forward and slashed at Zealot. The Sith defended the blows easily however. Umdar jumped again so that Zealot now stood trapped between the two Jedi. Darth Zealot: "Hmm, clever." Darl Shogar: "No escape Zealot!" Zealot spun around just as Umdar lunged at his back. Darth Zealot: "Try to play fairly!" Umdar Quan: "Stop mocking us!" However, as Umdar swung Zealot flicked his blade. The red beam of energy sliced through Umdar's own blade, leaving it useless. Darl Shogar: "Umdar no!" But before the Padawan could attack Zealot jumped through the air a kicked Darl squarely in the face. As Darl stumbled backwards Zealot slashed his blade a cut into the Jedi's chest, killing him instantly. Darth Zealot: "One down..." But Zealot didn't finish the sentance for he was suddenly launched into the air. Landing painfully on a rock which knocked him out to. Umdar hurried over to Ben and grabbed his hand. Umdar Quan: "Come on Master Dovallia, we have to get out of here!" Slowly Umdar began to drag the unconscious Jedi back to the ship. Umdar Quan: "So close..." Darth Sion: "Yet so far." In a flash Umdar snatched up one of Ben's lightsabers. Umdar Quan: "Die Sith trash!" Sion flew through the air and the two clashed blades. Though Umdar was strong in the Force he was not a skilled duelist and Sion quickly began to over power him. With a flick of his blade Sion broke Umdar's defence then impaled him with his lightsaber. Darth Sion: "Jedi whelp." As Sion turned to Ben Dovallia however the Jedi suddenly sat up and sent a poweful Force push to the Sith. Ben Dovallia: "Sith Scum." Ben pushed himself to his feet and grabbed his blades. Yes he had failed here, he wasn't as powerful as he should be, none of the Jedi were. Master Soru was holding them back. Ben knew what he had to do...

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