A disturbance in the Force... . Alternate Star Wars . 2012 MocAthalon
Team: A Moctley Crew
Category: 9. Alternate Star Wars
One will often meet his destiny on the path he takes trying to alter it.
Obi Wan Kenobi left for the Utapau system to engage general Grievous. Anakin remains in the Jedi Temple on Coruscant. chancellor Palpatine summons Anakin and reveals himself as a Sith Lord.
text is under each picture
Jedi Temple :
Anakin: "... must save Padmé...is there really a power to save one from dying ?"
The fear of loss is a path to the dark side...
Anakin: "must remember Master Yoda's teachings..."
Yoda: "Great care you must take, your visions, realized they will be, when efforts to avoid you make. Embrace the light side of the Force you must."
Chancellor's Office :
Palpatine: "If you wish to become a complete and wise leader, you must embrace a larger view of the force"
Anakin: "You're the Sith Lord!"
Palpatine: "Listen to me anakin"
Palpatine: "I can help you, I can save the ones you love"
/ / / FlashBack / / /
Invisible hand, Count Dooku defeated, Obi Wan unconscious
Palpatine: "Leave him..."
/ / / / / /
Anakin: "No! you..."
Palpatine: "Don't trust the Jedi Anakin, they will expell you from the order if they find out"
Anakin: "...you endangered padmé...you wanted her dead, ordered her dead..."
Palpatine: "I can feel your anger, don't be afraid to use it, join my side and together, we can save ..."
Anakin: "Nooooo !"
Anakin charges at Palpatine, and Palpatine feels his anger, too much to control
Having disarmed Palpatine Anakin uses the Force to grab and hold him in the air.
Anakin: "you can't save anyone, you can't even save yourself!"
Palpatine: "I..hurgh... then kill me and embrace the darkside...you cannot escape your destiny..."
Anakin: "I will never join the dark side..."
Anakin releases Palpatine and Master Windu enters.
Anakin: "I will turn you over to the Jedi Counsel..."
Master Windu: "You did the right thing Anakin, you truly are the one who's to bring balance to the..."
????: "For the republic !!!!!"
A most peculiar clone trooper storms the chancellor's office, emptying his (her?) weapons against everyone in the vicinity.
Commander Pink: "Uhuh
And THAT is how minority groups within the Clone Army gained recognition ;)
oh yeah, and Anakin brought balance to the Force or something.
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I hope you managed to understand what Yoda said in the beginning :S
The big Idea was to make a serious story, which abruptly ends by a most absurd happening, I think I succeeded in that, I focused a lot on making my alternate story fit in the movie. I chose to jump in just before Anakin turns to the Dark Side.
some extra photo's
a Set-up I didn't use eventually, would have complicated the story too much.
This got blogged on EB starwas homepage