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The Story of Avacon; chapter II, Korriban . Sorry for the delay everyone. Had some camera problems. This will be a rather short episode but it will get more interesting farther into the story. Enjoy! . Avacon awoke, freezing cold and sore to the bones. He was aware of voices in the distance, speaking a tongue he did not understand. He was suddenly aware of three figures standing over him. He turned around and ignited his lightsaber. He was blasted with a bolt of lightning that sent his lightsaber flying. Hooded Sith- "Don't kill him Carog! we need to know why he came here! The Sith Lord Carog swung his saber at Avacon, The hooded Sith; Maloch, Ignited his blade and blocked the attack Darth Carog- "What else do we need to know Maloch? he's a Jedi and he's found us!" Darth Maloch- "Hes only a boy, and I sense great power in him. We will at least talk to him before we slaughter him." Avacon Gained full conscientiousness and sat upright, noticed the familiar tomb to his left. Avacon- "I was a Jedi, trained on Tython. I am their enemy now. I was called here by the Dark Side." Darth Maloch- "We are in need of recruits, I will take you as my apprentice if you are who you say you are. Beware that the Sith train their apprentices much differently than the Jedi." Exhaustion caught up with Avacon and he fainted. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ He awoke on a bed two days later wearing black robes. He was suddenly aware of a man standing over him with a blaster rifle. Avacon- " Who are you? Where am I? Why do you have a gun?" Man- " First of all Sir, I am Aran, sniper In the Mandalorian army. I serve under your master Darth Maloch. You are on Korriban in the academy. Darth Maloch brought you in from the valley two days ago, you were pretty beat up from your crash. And this? This is so I could stun you in case you went crazy on me when you woke up. Theres an incoming hologram from your master, he will explain everything. Oh and QD-9D will help you get around the academy." Maloch- "Hello my apprentice, I am away in the Valley of the Dark Lords ridding us of republic patrols, I will return tomorrow to begin your training and help you to better understand our situation." Thanks for checking it out guys! sorry if this was a little boring, but bear with me, the next episode will be a little more exciting. And as always please leave a comment.

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